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Autobiographical Essay?

By wesr_gordon June 7, 2014 in Pre-PA General Discussion

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One school requires an autobiographical essay as a part of their supplemental. They explicitly state this is not a personal statement or a statement of why you are applying to PA school. So I'm afraid to ask: what angle are they going for here?

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Never heard of that. I'd like to know also.

I would suspect that you should write a brief story of your life. While it is not a focused essay on why you want to be a PA, it does provide an opportunity to cover that subject tangentially, as well as jobs you've had.

Try this: Answer the question: in 500 words, who are you and how did you get to where you are today?

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ugolong, that still sounds an awful lot like what I (and many essays I've seen) have written in the personal statement

It is like many essays, other than it describes your life to date as well. I pretty much wrote like that when it was my turn.

I think that a difference with some essays is that it doesn't cover the x reasons why you want to be a PA and instead gives the adcom some background as to who you are.

Anyone else have advice?

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• Tips for Supplemental Applications

Many schools will require you to submit a supplemental application, along with a supplemental application fee. Most supplemental applications require you to write additional essays. These essays give you a chance to explain why you think you are a good fit for that particular school.

You should complete each of your supplemental applications within two weeks of being prompted to do so. If you take longer, the schools may get the impression that you are not seriously interested in them. (Note: Supplemental applications are part of the reason why you should not apply to too many schools! It takes time to complete your supplemental application essays thoughtfully and carefully.) A former CE pre-health advisee created this Supplemental Application Tracking spreadsheet for other students to use: review the tips on the "Overview" page, save a copy for yourself, and then use the spreadsheet to track the flow of your supplemental applications.

Note: If your common application includes a "Program Materials" section that includes each school's supplemental essays, list just one school at first. Once you've completed the entire primary application, submit it so that you can get in the queue to have your coursework entries verified. You can then log back into the application and add your remaining schools so that you can take more time to respond to their supplemental essay prompts. 

(Many thanks to Candice Eisenhauer, Director of Health Professions Advising at Wheaton College, for her valuable contributions to this section!)

Tips for responding to supplemental essay prompts

Applicants to MD and DO programs: You can get started on pre-writing your supplemental essays in advance by referring to one of the following lists of supplemental essay prompts: 

• Medical School Headquarters website
• MedEdits website  (scroll down past all of the text on this page to find the list). 

Applicants to PA programs: 

• PA Platform website

To our knowledge, no such lists exist for the other health professions.

Your goal here is to convey your understanding of what they stand for, how they train their students, and their philosophies.  

Research each school thoroughly by reading all of the information on their website and in your profession's reference guide. If you can also talk with admissions directors in advance by participating in a virtual fair, CU's annual Health Professions Expo, or by physically visiting the school, all the better -- take notes so that you can refer back to them when you are completing your supplemental applications.

• Traditional vs. systems-based
• Lecture vs. flipped classrooms vs. problem-based-learning
• Special tracks that fit your interests, as demonstrated by your activity history (rural health, public health, global health, research, etc.)
• Appealing aspects of their approach to clinical training
• Support services available at that school, such as mentoring programs, assistance with test prep for licensing exams, or assistance with job placement
• Student culture, especially any appealing opportunities to engage with their campus community (student groups, service groups, etc.)
• Read the school's mission statement and explain how your strengths are in line with the school’s mission.
• If you have talked with an admissions officer during a fair or have visited the school, say so and indicate what excited you about their particular program.
• If you have spoken with one of their faculty members or current/former students and have learned more about their program that way, say so.
• Find a copy of their latest newsletter so that you can talk about current events going on at that school. 
• If you have family support in the area, you can mention that, but it shouldn't be the only reason you cite.
• Likewise, if the location allows you to continue to engage in a favorite hobby for stress relief, you can also say so, but location should not be a primary part of your answer.

Think broadly about diversity. Diversity questions on supplemental applications typically are not only focused only on racial, ethnic, cultural, or socioeconomic diversity. You may find it helpful to refer to the figure on  this AAMC document on Holistic Review  for guidance on thinking about the many aspects of your background and identity that could help you contribute positively to the diversity of thought in professional school and your approach to caring for patients from a wide variety of backgrounds and belief systems.

When you talk about these aspects of your background and identity in this essay, share illustrative anecdotes and reflect upon the ways in which they have shaped you:

• How have they impacted your awareness of certain factors and/or influenced the decisions you've made since then?
• What did I learn?
• What did I realize I need to get better at?
• What changes have I made as a result?

Possible topics to include in this essay, if they apply to you:

• Formal, long-term activities that gave you insight into social justice issues. 
• Your experiences with a different culture, outside of the U.S.

Be aware: An essay prompt with this wording is not asking for you to discuss factors such as your religion, ethnicity, sexual orientation, gender identity, political beliefs, etc. Rather, they are interested in learning more about your  experiences or personality traits that relate to your suitability for a career as a clinician. 

Topics that fit here:

• Any autobiographical information, including formative experiences that have shaped who you are today or influences that impacted your career goals (e.g., could include where you grew up, family circumstances, obstacles, health challenges, etc.), that you have not already mentioned elsewhere in your application.
• Periods of lower-than-normal grades (but note that one or two Cs is not worthy of mention here)
• Pattern of withdrawals from courses (again, one or two Ws is not enough to warrant mention here)
• Leaves of absence from school, etc.

... The key is to provide an explanation , not an excuse . Explain what happened, what you learned from the experience, and what you are doing differently now to avoid a repeat of the situation. Take personal responsibility; do not complain about other people's actions.

Although you have probably listed all/most of your current activities on your common application, this prompt on a supplemental application is asking you to provide a summary of all of your current activities in one paragraph or so. As you write this paragraph,  state your rationale or  motivations  for being involved in each current activity. 

• Any additional coursework to complete remaining prerequisites or to deepen your science knowledge
• Current clinical/research/volunteer experiences
• Current job (Note: It's okay to be working in an unrelated field so that you can pay your bills, but keep in mind that most jobs have some aspect that is relevant to your preparation for a clinical career. Wait staff in restaurants are using their interpersonal communication skills constantly, engineers must use their critical thinking skills, etc. Applicants to all types of professional programs may find it useful to review the AAMC's list of entry-level competencies for guidance on thinking about relevant skills you are using in your current work.

This type of question is typically optional. Consider the following topic areas:

• Information about new relevant experiences that you have started this summer.
• Information about your background that you haven't mentioned elsewhere, particularly if this aspect of your background has informed your strengths, motivations, or goals.
• Tell them more about what you do for fun and why you find it meaningful. This type of approach will help the reader get a sense of you as a real person and may help interviewers connect with you based on mutual interests.

However, if you really feel that you have nothing significant to add here, then do not feel pressured to write something trivial.

This essay needs to demonstrate that you have done your due diligence in learning about the work of an osteopathic physician. Review all of the information posted on this AACOM webpage and watch the two short videos posted on that page. Also read all of the information listed in this chapter of the Osteopathic Medical College Information Book .

When you answer this question, provide supporting examples from your shadowing experiences with an osteopathic physician. 

Do not say that you are applying to osteopathic programs this year because you applied to M.D. programs last year but didn't get in. (Is it crazy that we need to say this? Maybe, but admissions committees at D.O. schools see this type of answer all the time !)

Prompt: The autobiographical essay should be an account of the applicant's life history and experiences. Please note this is not a personal statement or a statement of reasons for applying to PA school.

Advice: Respond to this prompt in the same way you'd respond to the "Tell me about yourself" question at an interview. 

First, some guidelines:

• It is  not  the same question as, “Tell me why you want to be a ______.”
• For each item on this list, identify the top 2-3 reasons why you find it motivating/rewarding.
• Now look through your lists of reasons. What are the common themes that keep coming up?
• Mentoring/coaching others : TA, summer camp counselor, sports coach, volunteer at crisis hotline
• Problem solving : working on my car, doing research,  crisis hotline
• Creativity : cooking, doing research, explaining concepts to students as a TA
• Building/maintaining community : sports, church

Tips for structuring your answer:

• You can begin by sharing a bit about your background: where you were raised, where you went to school, etc.
• If your upbringing had a profound effect on your reasons for wanting to become a clinician or has informed how you want to approach your future work, succinctly share this information.
• Aim to convey your top 3-4 themes you identified above.
• As always, your writing will be richer and more memorable if you tell several little illustrative stories within the essay.

Answers to common questions about supplemental applications

Great question! Please do not wait. Due to the aggressive timing of the rolling admissions process, the best strategy is to continue to proceed full-steam-ahead with the application process, even while you are waiting for your test score. This means completing and submitting each secondary application  within two weeks of receiving it.  (Many schools will track how long it takes for each applicant to send their secondary application in. If you are slow to return their secondary, that school will probably assume—correctly or incorrectly—that they are not high on your priority list, which can hurt your chance of getting an interview.)

Many professional schools automatically send all applicants a secondary application. Many others, however, conduct an initial screening of common applications before sending out secondary applications (think of this as a courtesy; they aren’t asking everyone to spend extra time and money on a secondary application). 

Bottom line: Expect to receive an initial flurry of secondaries. The rest will trickle in more slowly as schools conduct their initial screenings of the common applications.

Although it will be tempting, avoid using the exact same essay in response to multiple schools' supplemental essay prompts. The wording is usually a little different, so you must be vigilant in making sure that you are responding to each specific prompt.  

Be incredibly careful when re-using essays to make sure you do not include the name of the wrong school!

If a secondary application asks for information that strikes you as redundant, remember that they probably have a good reason for asking you to provide that information again now. Do not write, “See Primary Application” and do not simply copy-and-paste the information you provided in your common application. Instead, take a fresh approach to providing the information they are asking for in this section. They probably put high value on that information and want it provided here in an easy-to-reference way.

No, but it should look like a professional photo - you should be dressed as you intend to be dressed for your interviews. The lighting should be good, the background neutral. The main focus should be your face. Remember, admissions committees use these to remember you after your interview. Look at the photo you plan to send and ask if it shows you the way you want them to remember you.

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Autobiography structure help

sup sup... Ive got a SA that is asking for a 3200 character autobiography because of course that is enough to talk about my life history and experiences... anyway I wrote out something I like, but I am not sure if its the right direction....

"The autobiographical essay should be an account of the applicant's life history and experiences. Please note that this is not a personal statement or a statement of reasons for applying to PA school."

I am so much more than my autobiography alludes to! Im at the character limit rn, but im not sure if I should make the essay less of a chronological piece or make it about everything I love to do and my passions and blah blah blah... Burnt out from writing sorry about the laxiness.

If you want to read it:

I grew up in rural southeast Wisconsin where I spent my childhood exploring the woods, fields, and communities that surround Brighton, Wisconsin. My four older brothers, younger sister, and myself were raised on an old farmhouse where my parents had relocated to when I was five. In Wisconsin, I attended Brighton Elementary and graduated among a class of 16 in 2006.

In elementary school, I fostered and developed a propensity for artistic expression and creativity. It seemed inevitable that I would pursue a career in graphic design, though I had never given serious thought to a college education. When I transitioned from grade school to high school, I found the larger class sizes to be intimidating and lost my academic orientation. Despite struggling academically, I maintained my artistic abilities and chose to pursue a degree in graphic design.

I was eager to move out of Wisconsin after completing high school and relocated to Steamboat Springs, Colorado where I was accepted to Colorado Mountain College in 2011. At the community college, I continued to struggle academically, placing more priority on recreational activities and social involvement. The gravity of my slipping performance began to sink in when I was placed on academic suspension in the spring of 2012 and lost the privilege to pursue an education. As I hoped to be the first college graduate in my family of six, I was incredibly disappointed with myself.

I was responsible for supporting myself financially and continued working as a server in fine dining. My college career seemed over and I considered a career as a server. When I mentioned this to a fellow server, he took it upon himself to change my mind. I was inspired that someone who I looked up to believed in me a saw a future for myself that I could not see. This individual replenished me with a sense of purpose and inspired me to pursue an education once again.

After appealing the academic suspension twice, I was allowed the opportunity to pursue an education once again. I changed my major at the community college to general studies and took prerequisites that would allow me to transfer to a four-year university. I raised my GPA from 1.7 to 3.2 and was accepted to The University of Colorado Boulder in 2015. Before moving to Boulder in September of 2015, I completed a monumental goal of mine and traveled solo from Steamboat Springs, Colorado to the border of Guatemala on a 1982 Honda Goldwing motorcycle.

At Boulder, I was determined to build upon my success in community college and continued to raise my GPA. Despite novel and challenging coursework, I taught myself to accurately synthesize and retain large volumes of complex information efficiently. During much of that time, I continued working as a server and developed strong interpersonal skills.

In my final year at University I began to plan another motorcycle trip that I would begin after graduating, only this would be much longer than the previous trip. <- Not done

Mastering Your PA School Personal Statement: A Comprehensive Guide with Samples (2024)

by internationalmedicalaid

Your Physician Assistant (PA) application process looms large, its peaks and valleys holding both challenge and promise. Now you’re faced with writing an often underestimated, yet significantly important, PA personal statement. It’s your narrative, your chance to climb above the numbers and formulas, revealing the beating heart of the aspiring healthcare professional behind the GPA and test scores.

This guide aims to be your compass, navigating the terrain of crafting a PA personal statement that shines. Forget generic templates and hollow platitudes; we’ll delve into the depths, uncovering the true essence of this pivotal document. Here, you’ll learn not just the “what” and “how,” but the “why.” You’ll understand the role your personal statement plays in your application, how it differs from other medical field essays, and the critical elements that make it stand out.

What’s in This PA Personal Statement Writing Guide?

A PA personal statement is a concise, compelling narrative (typically 500-750 words) that showcases your unique qualifications and motivations for pursuing the PA profession. It’s not a laundry list of accomplishments or a regurgitation of your resume. It’s your chance to become a living portrait, painted with anecdotes, impactful experiences, and genuine reflections that reveal your personal and professional qualities.

Unlike general medical school essays, the PA personal statement emphasizes collaboration and teamwork. You’re not aiming to be a lone star doctor; you’re showcasing how you fit seamlessly within a healthcare team, complementing and elevating the work of physicians and other providers. Think of it as a bridge, connecting your past passions and experiences to your future vision as a PA, all built upon the core values of patient-centered care.

While strong academics and standardized test scores form the solid foundation, the personal statement adds the human touch, the emotional resonance that binds the elements together. It paints a picture of you as a well-rounded individual, with intellectual strength, resilience, compassion, and a burning desire to serve.

In this guide, we will dissect the PA Personal Statement’s essential components and reveal the secrets to crafting a statement that will leave a lasting impression on admissions committees. So, get ready to unleash your inner storyteller, because your PA journey begins with the pen (or keyboard) in hand.

We’ll explore crafting compelling narratives, showcasing key skills and experiences, and mastering the art of self-reflection. Together, we’ll turn your personal statement into a masterpiece, paving the way for your entry into the rewarding profession of Physician Assisting.

Elements of a Winning PA Personal Statement

Let’s start working on your personal statement. This isn’t just an ordinary essay. The PA Personal Statement is an opportunity to show admissions committees who you are through your experiences, passions, and goals. To make your statement stand out, we need to focus on the key elements that will capture the attention of the admissions committees.

The Committee's Eye on Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Before you begin writing your personal statement, consider what the admissions committee is looking for. They aim to accept skilled, compassionate, and adaptable Physician Assistants. They value applicants who demonstrate a real commitment to patient care and an ability to empathize and understand patients’ needs.

Strong clinical skills, including hands-on experience and a proficiency in performing basic procedures, are important, as is a desire for continuous learning. Effective teamwork and collaboration are crucial in the PA role, as you will need to work closely with other medical professionals. 

The ability to show leadership, think critically, and advocate for patients and the profession is also highly regarded. Lastly, admissions committees are looking for authentic individuals who have grown through their experiences and can demonstrate reflection and adaptability.

The Art of Storytelling and Reflection in Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Now that you understand what’s needed, it’s time to begin writing your personal statement. This document is more than just an academic summary; it’s your personal narrative that takes the reader through the significant experiences that motivated you to pursue a career as a Physician Assistant.

Engage in detailed storytelling. Rather than simply stating facts, bring your experiences to life. Use detailed descriptions, strong language, and real-life examples that reflect your values and motivations.

Be open about your experiences. Discussing challenges you’ve faced, meaningful patient interactions, or significant volunteer work can demonstrate your resilience, compassion, and personal development.

Link your experiences. Show how each experience, from early interests to recent work or educational pursuits, contributed to your understanding of patient care and reinforced your decision to become a Physician Assistant. This will help create a cohesive and compelling narrative that clearly demonstrates your path and passion for the field.

Highlighting Direct Patient Care Hours in Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Admissions committees are looking for concrete evidence of your clinical skills, and your direct patient care hours are crucial in demonstrating this. Instead of just listing the number of hours you’ve spent in a clinic, you should provide more detail. 

Describe specific situations where you used your knowledge to provide comfort and contribute to positive outcomes for patients. 

Highlight the important skills you developed, such as taking vital signs, performing physical exams, communicating effectively with patients, and working well with healthcare teams. 

Also, discuss what you learned from each experience. Talk about how successful treatments and even mistakes have improved your approach to patient care, your ability to make clinical judgments, and your overall desire to continue learning and growing in the field.

Integrating Pre-PA Internships Abroad in Your Physician Assistant Personal Statement

When crafting your PA personal statement, it’s essential to include experiences such as pre-PA internships abroad. These experiences are not just fulfilling but also crucial in shaping your understanding and approach to healthcare. 

For example, if you’ve volunteered in a clinic in Peru or shadowed a healthcare team with IMA in Kenya, these international exposures can significantly enhance your Physician Assistant personal statement. Discussing these experiences shows your ability to adapt and work in unfamiliar healthcare systems, highlighting your cultural sensitivity and communication skills, which are vital in dealing with diverse patients. Such experiences also demonstrate your commitment to serving underserved communities and addressing healthcare disparities, a crucial aspect of the PA school requirement.

In your PA personal statement, don’t just mention these internships, instead explain exactly what you learned from them. Share specific incidents or patient interactions that left an impression on you and discuss how these experiences have shaped your desire to become a Physician Assistant. Perhaps there was a moment when you were struck by the stark differences in healthcare accessibility or a time when you were able to help a patient overcome a language barrier, offering them comfort and understanding.

Furthermore, as you discuss these international internships in your Physician Assistant personal statement, it’s also beneficial to reflect on any challenges you faced and how you overcame them. This not only demonstrates resilience but also shows your willingness to learn and grow from new experiences. Discussing these points in your PA personal statement will provide depth and originality, making your application stand out.

To further strengthen your application, consider using our PA school admissions consulting . Our services can provide valuable insights and help you effectively articulate your experiences and aspirations in your PA personal statement. We can also assist you in preparing for PA school interview questions, ensuring you’re ready to discuss your experiences and motivations in depth.

Lastly, don’t forget to mention your direct patient care hours for PA school. Detailing these hours, especially if they were part of your internships abroad, can significantly bolster your application. It shows not only your clinical experience but also your dedication and hands-on approach to learning about patient care.

Incorporating these elements into your PA personal statement will not only fulfill the PA school requirement but also paint a comprehensive picture of your qualifications, experiences, and dedication to becoming a Physician Assistant.

Physician Assistant Personal Statements Should Balance the Personal and Professional

Creating a compelling personal statement for your Physician Assistant (PA) application is about more than listing experiences; it’s about presenting a cohesive narrative that aligns your personal journey with your professional aspirations. In your PA personal statement, connect your personal experiences directly to your goal of becoming a PA, clearly demonstrating how each step has equipped you with the values and skills necessary for the profession. It’s important to maintain a professional tone throughout the statement, using clear and precise language while meticulously checking for any grammar or spelling errors. This demonstrates your attention to detail and commitment to presenting your best self.

As you craft your Physician Assistant personal statement, don’t shy away from highlighting what makes you unique. Your passions, hobbies, or unique life experiences contribute to your well-rounded personality and potential as a future PA. Discussing these aspects of your life can help set you apart from other candidates. However, it’s essential to link these personal qualities back to how they will serve you in a healthcare setting, ensuring your statement remains focused and relevant to the PA profession.

By integrating these elements, you’re not just writing a personal statement; you’re embarking on a process of self-discovery and affirming your readiness for a career in Physician Assisting. Authenticity and reflection are key. Share genuine insights into your growth and how your experiences have shaped your decision to pursue this career. As you write, imagine you’re constructing a clear and insightful narrative that reflects your journey and aspirations.

Remember, your PA personal statement is a dynamic document that will evolve with each draft and revision. Embrace this process and seek feedback from trusted mentors, advisors, or PA school admissions consulting services. These resources can provide valuable perspectives and help refine your narrative, ensuring it resonates with admissions committees. Moreover, preparing for PA school interview questions can further clarify your thoughts and goals, making your personal statement more robust and reflective of your ambitions.

It’s also crucial to mention your direct patient care hours for PA school, as this experience is not just a requirement but a testament to your hands-on approach and commitment to the healthcare field. If you’ve had pre-PA internships abroad, weave these experiences into your narrative, showcasing your adaptability, cultural sensitivity, and dedication to understanding global health perspectives.

By carefully crafting your PA personal statement and integrating your unique experiences, reflections, and aspirations, you’re not just fulfilling the PA school requirement; you’re presenting a compelling and authentic narrative that showcases your readiness and enthusiasm for the Physician Assistant profession. So, start writing, and let your unique story lead the way to your future as a PA.

Tips for Crafting a Standout Statement

Creating a compelling personal statement for your Physician Assistant (PA) application is about more than listing experiences; it’s about presenting a cohesive narrative that aligns your personal journey with your professional aspirations. In your PA personal statement, connect your personal experiences directly to your goal of becoming a PA, clearly demonstrating how each step has equipped you with the values and skills necessary for the profession. 

• It’s important to maintain a professional tone throughout the statement, using clear and precise language while meticulously checking for any grammar or spelling errors. This demonstrates your attention to detail and commitment to presenting your best self.
• As you craft your Physician Assistant personal statement, don’t shy away from highlighting what makes you unique. Your passions, hobbies, or unique life experiences contribute to your well-rounded personality and potential as a future PA.
• Discussing these aspects of your life can help set you apart from other candidates. However, it’s essential to link these personal qualities back to how they will serve you in a healthcare setting, ensuring your statement remains focused and relevant to the PA profession.
• Authenticity and reflection are key. Share genuine insights into your growth and how your experiences have shaped your decision to pursue this career. As you write, imagine you’re constructing a clear and insightful narrative that reflects your journey and aspirations.

By integrating these elements you’re not just writing a personal statement, but also you’re embarking on a process of self-discovery and affirming your readiness for a career in Physician Assisting. 

Remember, your PA personal statement is a dynamic document that will evolve with each draft and revision. Embrace this process and seek feedback from trusted mentors, advisors, or IMA PA school admissions consulting services . These resources can provide valuable perspectives and help refine your narrative, ensuring it resonates with admissions committees. Moreover, preparing for PA school interview questions can further clarify your thoughts and goals, making your personal statement more robust and reflective of your ambitions.

Again, this can’t be emphasized enough, mention your direct patient care hours for PA school, as this experience is not just a requirement but a reflection of your hands-on approach and commitment to the healthcare field. If you’ve had pre-PA internships abroad, weave these experiences into your narrative, showcasing your adaptability, cultural sensitivity, and dedication to understanding global health perspectives.

Common Pitfalls and How to Avoid Them

Even the most dedicated adventurer can stumble upon unexpected obstacles. Crafting a winning PA personal statement is no different. While you meticulously hone your narrative, be wary of these common pitfalls that can snag your progress and dim your statement’s shine:

The Siren Song of Clichés

Like overused spices, clichéd themes leave a stale taste in the reader’s mouth. Steer clear of generic statements like “I’ve always wanted to help people” or “I admire the doctor-patient relationship.” These lack specificity and fail to demonstrate your unique motivations and qualities.

Instead, go into the specific experiences that ignited your passion. Perhaps it was witnessing a family member’s struggle with healthcare or volunteering at a clinic that opened your eyes to the impact PAs can make. Use vivid imagery and emotional depth to make your story resonate.

Missing the "Why" Factor

Your personal statement is a declaration of your destination. Don’t leave the admissions committee guessing why you seek the PA path. Clearly articulate your motivations, beyond the generic desire to “help people.”

Unveil your “why”! Is it the collaborative nature of the profession? The opportunity to advocate for underserved communities? The intellectual challenge of diagnosing and treating diverse medical conditions? Be specific and passionate in revealing what fuels your PA aspirations.

The Fog of Generalities

Saying you “have strong communication skills” is like claiming you “like food.” It’s vague and unappetizing. Breathe life into your statement by showcasing these skills through concrete examples. Describe a challenging patient interaction where your communication prowess de-escalated a situation or fostered genuine rapport.

Illustrate your claims. Did you effectively collaborate with a healthcare team to diagnose a complex case? Did you patiently explain a medical procedure to a nervous patient, easing their anxiety? Let your experiences paint a vivid picture of your capabilities.

Proofreading and Polishing

Grammar mistakes and structural inconsistencies are like potholes on your narrative road, jarring the reader from your story. Don’t let careless errors diminish the impact of your statement.

Proofread relentlessly. Utilize spellcheck, grammar tools, and seek feedback from trusted readers. Ensure clarity, conciseness, and a smooth flow in your writing. Remember, even minor errors can leave a negative impression.

By keeping these pitfalls at bay, you’ll ensure your PA personal statement remains clear, compelling, and free from roadblocks. Remember, every sentence, every anecdote, is a chance to build your bridge to the PA profession. Choose your bricks wisely, polish them with dedication, and embark on this journey with confidence, knowing that your authentic voice and well-crafted narrative will illuminate the path ahead.

Crafting Your Masterpiece - A Step-by-Step Guide

Turning your aspirations into compelling prose requires a deliberate process. Fear not, aspiring PA, for within this section lies your roadmap to crafting a personal statement that resonates with confidence and authenticity. Let’s dissect the writing process, transforming blank pages into a vibrant portrait of your journey towards becoming a Physician Assistant.

Brainstorming

Before writing your narrative, gather the raw materials. Begin by:

• Reflecting on your life : Identify pivotal moments that shaped your desire for the PA profession. Consider volunteer experiences, patient interactions, personal challenges, or academic achievements that sparked your passion.
• Mapping your skills and qualities : Make a list of the attributes that make you an ideal PA candidate. Include communication skills, empathy, critical thinking, teamwork, and any specific skillsets you’ve honed through work or volunteer experiences.
• Brainstorming unique anecdotes : Dig deep, recalling impactful stories that showcase your skills, values, and personal growth. Seek anecdotes that reveal you, not just your resume.

Now, let your pen (or keyboard) dance freely. Compose your first draft without worrying about word count or structure. Capture your stories, weave in your reflections, and allow your passion to flow onto the page. This is your unfiltered vision so embrace the messiness and honesty of it all.

With your raw draft laid bare, it’s time to refine the rough edges. Read through your essay, focusing on:

• Structure and flow : Does your narrative progress logically? Does each section build upon the previous one, leading to a compelling conclusion?
• Content and focus : Are your anecdotes relevant and impactful? Do they showcase your key skills and motivations for becoming a PA?
• Clarity and conciseness : Eliminate unnecessary words and sentences. Ensure your message is communicated effectively and directly.

Now, it’s time for the meticulous brushstrokes. Focus on:

• Grammar and mechanics : Eliminate typos, punctuation errors, and sentence structure inconsistencies. Ensure your writing is polished and professional.
• Word choice and sentence structure : Craft vivid descriptions, utilize strong verbs, and vary your sentence length for rhythmic flow.
• Overall tone and voice : Does your personal statement reflect your authentic personality and passion? Does it strike the right balance between professionalism and personal warmth?

Feedback - Seeking Expert Opinions

Don’t embark on this journey alone. Seek feedback from trusted mentors, peers, or even PA school admissions consulting services. Consider their suggestions, but remember, your voice ultimately shapes your narrative. Accept constructive criticism while staying true to your unique perspective.

Remember, crafting a successful PA personal statement is an iterative process. Embrace the drafts, revisions, and the occasional stumble. Each step takes you closer to a finished masterpiece, a declaration of your calling that will resonate with admissions committees and pave the way for your entry into this noble profession. So, pick up your pen, unleash your inner storyteller, and write your way towards becoming the PA you envision!

Ten Sample PA Personal Statements with Analysis

Crafting your PA personal statement can feel like navigating a dense jungle – thrilling, yes, but daunting too. With each step, you confront a kaleidoscope of possibilities, unsure which path leads to that coveted acceptance letter. Fear not, intrepid future PA! Within this section lies a treasure trove – ten personal statements, penned by PA school applicants, each a map etched with the footprints of triumph.

Think of these statements not as rigid templates, but as declarations of experience, motivation, and self-discovery. Each one demonstrates a unique story, showcasing the captivating qualities and unwavering conviction that propelled these individuals to the PA profession. But it’s not just about their victories.

Each statement also invites you to examine their missteps, the subtle flaws that could have dimmed their shine. With a discerning eye, you’ll learn to not only admire, but also dissect, extracting the secrets that make these narratives sing.

So, brace yourself for an expedition into the heart of analying PA personal statements. With each sample, you’ll encounter a new voice, a new set of challenges and triumphs, each offering invaluable insights that will guide you in crafting your own path to success.

Sample One - Physician Assistant Personal Statement​

Becoming a Physician Assistant (PA) is more than my professional ambition. My drive to be a PA is a personal mission born from a deep-seated desire to impact lives positively. That desire was kindled when I was growing up in Columbus, Ohio. I’m a first-generation Chinese American, and I’ve witnessed a world where cultural richness blends with the pressing needs of accessible healthcare in my community. This unique upbringing has been the driving force behind my resolve to bridge gaps and provide compassionate care to those in need.

Volunteering at Riverside Methodist Hospital was my introduction to healthcare and also a revelation of the profound difference one individual can make. I observed, learned, and took to heart the importance of empathetic care and its impact on diverse communities. This realization solidified my decision to pursue the PA path, a role that perfectly aligns with my aspiration to be intimately involved in patient care while also offering the flexibility to explore various medical specialties.

Hands-on patient care hours are not just a checkbox for me but are a cornerstone of my medical education. My experiences at the OSU Wexner Medical Center were pivotal, equipping me with skills and insights that are vital for any aspiring PA. It was there that I learned the importance of a meticulous approach to patient care and the profound impact of attention to detail.

My academic journey at Ohio State University advanced my understanding of the human body and medical science. Courses like anatomy and physiology were integral in shaping my approach to medicine and honing my problem-solving skills. This academic rigor has prepared me well for the challenges of PA school and beyond.

Seeking a broader worldview, I ventured abroad for an internship in Mombasa, Kenya. These experiences honed my clinical skills and by immersing myself in different healthcare settings my understanding has become a global perspective. Working alongside local healthcare providers, I gained invaluable practical experience and a deeper appreciation for cultural sensitivity and adaptability in healthcare.

The journey to PA school is competitive, and understanding this, I sought guidance from experienced PAs. Their insights were instrumental in shaping my application and helping me articulate my unique experiences and aspirations. Their advice on tackling potential PA school interview questions has also been invaluable in preparing me to present my story confidently and authentically.

I look back at my journey with a sense of accomplishment and forward to PA school with anticipation. Each experience, from my hands-on patient care at Riverside Methodist Hospital to the invaluable lessons learned abroad, has been a stepping stone towards my goal. My personal statement reflects my journey, my aspirations, and my unwavering commitment to the PA profession.

Pursuing a PA career is more than a professional choice; it’s a pledge to lifelong learning, patient advocacy, and continuous personal and professional growth. I’m fully aware of the challenges that lie ahead, but I’m also driven by a strong commitment to healthcare and a passion for making a difference in patients’ lives. 

As I embark on this next phase, I’m eager to face the rigors of PA school and come out as a well-rounded, compassionate, and dedicated Physician Assistant, ready to contribute positively to the healthcare community.

PA School Personal Statement Expert Commentary​

When you recount your experiences, don’t merely list them but breathe life into them. For instance, narrate an incident at Riverside Methodist Hospital where your involvement was instrumental, perhaps a moment where your quick thinking or empathetic approach made a tangible difference in a patient’s outcome. Such stories are the heartbeats of your narrative, providing a glimpse into your character and commitment.

Moreover, the art of self-reflection cannot be overstated. Reflect deeply on how your experiences, particularly your volunteering and internships abroad, have sculpted your understanding of healthcare. Delve into the insights gleaned from these experiences and elucidate how they have directed your aspirations. This reflective introspection demonstrates maturity, a quality highly valued in the medical profession.

As you articulate your aspirations, do not merely state them; illuminate them. If the Physician Assistant role appeals to you for its patient interaction, diagnostic challenges, or the ability to work across various specialties, then elucidate these aspects with fervor. Describe the thrill of diagnosing a challenging case or the fulfillment derived from patient interaction. Your passion for these elements should pulse through the narrative.

In discussing the attributes of the PA profession, such as its flexibility and collaborative nature, show rather than tell. Describe instances when you observed these qualities in action, perhaps during a team huddle at the clinic or in a high-pressure situation where collaborative efforts led to a positive patient outcome. These real-life examples will allow the admissions committee to visualize you in the PA role.

In delineating what sets you apart from other candidates, highlight your unique qualities. If your multicultural background gives you a unique perspective on patient care or if a particular experience has equipped you with skills uncommon among your peers, illuminate these aspects with clarity and pride. This uniqueness is your signature in the narrative.

When connecting your academic pursuits to your PA aspirations, illuminate how subjects like anatomy and physiology did not merely serve as prerequisites but as portals to a profound understanding of the human body. Share how these subjects enthralled you and how the knowledge gained is a cornerstone in your aspiration to become a PA.

Your international experience is a jewel in your narrative. When detailing your time in Mombasa, paint a vivid picture of the challenges, the learning, and the personal growth encountered. Describe the moments of cultural shock, the adaptation, and the insights into a healthcare system vastly different from what you know. This narrative will not only demonstrate your adaptability but also your broadened perspective.

As you approach the conclusion, focus on your future impact and contribution. Articulate a vision of the kind of Physician Assistant you aspire to be and how you plan to use your education and skills to impact the healthcare field and your community. This vision is a beacon that guides your narrative.

Discussing personal growth is not merely about stating it but demonstrating it through examples. Reflect on how your experiences to date have shaped you and how you anticipate PA school will catalyze further growth. This reflection shows a trajectory of growth and a commitment to continued development.

Sample Two - Physician Assistant Personal Statement​

My ambition to pursue a career as a Physician Assistant is the result of an intricate blend of personal encounters, an enduring passion for the sciences, and a genuine commitment to the welfare of my community. As a child of Vietnamese immigrants in the diverse neighborhood of Little Saigon in Cleveland, Ohio, my upbringing was deeply influenced by a community where familial bonds and healthcare were of paramount importance. Observing the healthcare struggles and communication hurdles faced by many in my community ignited within me a profound determination to bridge the healthcare divide for marginalized populations.

A defining moment during my teenage years crystalized this aspiration. When my grandmother, a courageous woman who had relocated to the U.S. for a better future for us, suffered a stroke, it was a moment of chaos and fear. However, the medical team’s response, especially the Physician Assistant’s blend of professional expertise and heartfelt care, profoundly affected me. Their ability to blend knowledge with compassion became the model I sought to emulate in my healthcare career.

This inspiration propelled me into the realm of healthcare, beginning with a volunteering stint at the renowned Cleveland Clinic. The dynamic atmosphere of the hospital, the intricate medical scenarios, and the constant opportunity to contribute positively confirmed my commitment to this field. I eagerly sought out every learning opportunity, from shadowing healthcare professionals to working as a medical scribe, each experience further solidifying my resolve.

At Case Western Reserve University, my academic path was fueled by an insatiable thirst for knowledge. Diving deep into biology and public health studies, I embraced each challenge as an opportunity to inch closer to becoming an adept healthcare professional. My approach was not just about academic excellence but cultivating a mindset of critical analysis and problem-solving, essential traits for a Physician Assistant.

Seeking a broader worldview, I embarked on an internship in Hanoi, Vietnam, where I worked in a local clinic. This experience was a revelation, exposing me to healthcare delivery in a context starkly different from the U.S. It underscored the importance of cultural understanding and adaptability in healthcare and enriched my perspective as a future healthcare provider.

As the competitive PA school application process loomed, I turned to admissions consulting services to refine my application. Their expert advice was instrumental in helping me articulate my narrative, passion, and the unique attributes I bring to the table. They guided me through the complexities of the process, ensuring my application resonated with dedication and authenticity.

In the period leading up to my PA school applications, I took time to introspect on the experiences that shaped my vision. The volunteering, the rigorous academics, the direct patient care, and the international exposure – each played a pivotal role in molding me into the candidate I am today. My personal statement thus became more than a summary of my past but is now a declaration of my commitment to a healthcare future filled with service and positive change.

In summing up, my journey to becoming a Physician Assistant is deeply anchored in my family’s legacy and my community’s narrative, driven by a fervent passion for science and a dedication to service. It’s a journey marked by relentless learning, compassion, and an unwavering quest for excellence. As I prepare to face the challenges of PA school, I do so with a clear vision of the empathetic, skilled, and committed Physician Assistant I am determined to become, ready to serve and promote healing in every community I touch.

Your story intertwines personal encounters, scientific passion, and community dedication, creating a compelling narrative that drives your desire to become a PA. Your Vietnamese immigrant upbringing in Little Saigon sets a unique stage for your understanding of healthcare disparities and subsequent commitment to bridge the gap.

Your grandmother’s stroke serves as a powerful turning point, effectively showcasing the impact of a PA’s expertise and compassion. Consider delving deeper into the emotions surrounding this episode, describing the initial fear and how the PA’s actions instilled a sense of hope and inspiration.

Share how witnessing healthcare struggles in your community or specific patient interactions affected you emotionally. Did any stories resonate deeply with your desire to serve marginalized populations?

Give concrete examples of how you bridged the healthcare gap. Did you translate for patients at the Cleveland Clinic or advocate for someone facing communication barriers? Briefly describe the situation and your positive impact.

Highlight specific instances where your Cleveland Clinic experiences fostered critical thinking and problem-solving skills. Did you contribute to a research project or help solve a clinical challenge? Showcase your practical application of knowledge.

Your statement transitions smoothly between different phases of your journey. However, consider condensing sections like “Seeking a broader worldview…” to give more space to detailed, impactful moments. Every sentence should count!

Remember, active voice and strong verbs keep your story engaging. Make your actions and contributions come alive through powerful language.

While comprehensive, ensure your statement consistently emphasizes your unique aspirations as a PA. Did your volunteer work involve specific populations relevant to your future goals? Did your experiences shape your approach to patient care in any particular way?

Your personal statement demonstrates a genuine passion for serving others and making a positive impact in healthcare. By adding emotional depth, showcasing your specific skills and contributions, and maintaining a clear focus on your unique path as a future PA, you can craft an even more captivating narrative that resonates deeply with the admissions committee.

You have roughly about 1200 more characters that you can use to add more depth to your statement. Every sentence counts, so make sure to use the entire canvas.

Remember, your story is powerful and unique. Keep refining it with passion and clarity, and you’ll be well on your way to achieving your PA dreams!

Sample Three - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Becoming a Physician Assistant is deeply personal, a journey shaped by a blend of lifelong learning, community engagement, and a resolute commitment to healthcare. As a 25-year-old woman hailing from the vibrant city of San Francisco, California, my story is one of resilience, passion, and a profound desire to contribute to the well-being of others.

Growing up in a city known for its cultural diversity and progressive thinking, I was exposed early on to a variety of health and wellness philosophies. The bustling streets, the rolling hills, and the eclectic mix of people and ideas provided the perfect backdrop for my growing interest in holistic healthcare. However, it was the personal health challenges faced by my family that truly ignited my passion for medicine. Witnessing a loved one battle a chronic illness, I experienced the healthcare system firsthand – the good, the bad, and the transformative. These experiences instilled in me a determination to be part of a profession that not only treats but also empathizes and empowers.

My initial step into the medical world was as a volunteer at UCSF Medical Center. Surrounded by some of the brightest minds in medicine, I was inspired every day by the dedication and compassion I saw. It was here that I first encountered Physician Assistants, working seamlessly alongside doctors and nurses, their versatility and patient-centered approach resonating deeply with me. The more I learned about the PA profession, the more I was convinced it was the path for me – a perfect blend of patient interaction, medical expertise, and the flexibility to explore various specialties.

With this goal in mind, I pursued a degree in Health Sciences at the University of California, Berkeley, immersing myself in studies that ranged from anatomy to public health policy. I thrived in the challenging environment, my resolve only strengthened by the rigorous academic demands. Simultaneously, I worked part-time as a community health worker, providing care and health education in underserved areas of San Francisco. This experience was eye-opening, exposing me to the stark health disparities that exist and reinforcing my desire to play a part in addressing them.

Seeking to further broaden my understanding of global health, I traveled to South America, where I participated in a healthcare program in rural Peru. The experience was profound, not just in the clinical skills I gained but in the deeper appreciation I developed for cultural competency and the unique health challenges faced by different populations.

As my 25th year approached, I knew it was time to take the next definitive step toward my goal. I meticulously researched PA programs, seeking ones that aligned with my passion for community health and preventative care. To ensure my application was as strong as it could be, I sought the expertise of a PA school admissions consulting service. Their guidance was invaluable, helping me to present my experiences, my motivations, and my aspirations in a manner that was both authentic and compelling.

Now, as I prepare to apply to PA schools, I reflect on the experiences that have led me here. From the bustling streets of San Francisco to the remote communities of Peru, each encounter has enriched my understanding and fueled my ambition. My personal statement is more than a recount of these experiences; it’s an affirmation of my dedication to becoming a PA, my commitment to lifelong learning, and my unwavering resolve to make a meaningful impact in healthcare.

The decision to become a Physician Assistant is really based on who I am. Born and raised in California, shaped by personal experiences and a deep-seated desire to contribute, I am ready to embrace the challenges and opportunities of PA school. With a vision to combine clinical expertise with compassionate care, I am determined to become a PA who makes a difference, one patient at a time.

Firstly, your diverse experiences in San Francisco and Peru offer a unique backdrop to your story. However, to truly captivate your reader, consider writing these scenes with more vivid detail. Describe the bustling streets of San Francisco, the rolling hills, the eclectic mix of people and ideas – let the reader feel the vibrancy of the city that shaped you. Similarly, when discussing your time in Peru, bring to life the rural landscape, the community you served, and the emotions that experience stirred within you.

Your academic journey and work as a community health worker are undoubtedly impressive. Yet, to deepen the impact of these experiences, reflect on a particular moment or patient that profoundly influenced you. What were the challenges you faced, and how did they shape your understanding of healthcare disparities? Such introspection will add a layer of depth to your commitment and understanding of the field.

While your narrative beautifully outlines your path and the inspirations behind it, consider delving deeper into your aspirations as a PA. What specific aspects of the role excite you? Is it the potential to bring holistic care to underserved communities, the dynamic nature of the job, or the ability to continuously grow and learn? By articulating these aspirations with clarity and passion, you give the reader a glimpse into your future as a PA.

Furthermore, your experiences abroad are not just footnotes in your journey; they are chapters that have significantly shaped your perspective. Expand on these, perhaps by detailing a poignant interaction or a challenging situation you navigated. How did these experiences enhance your cultural competency and understanding of global health issues?

This section in partcular, can be expanded upon to give your readers more depth of understanding:

“Seeking to further broaden my understanding of global health, I traveled to South America, where I participated in a healthcare program in rural Peru. The experience was profound, not just in the clinical skills I gained but in the deeper appreciation I developed for cultural competency and the unique health challenges faced by different populations.”

Why was the experience profound? What attributed directly to your cultural competency? What health challenges are faced?

As you approach the conclusion of your personal statement, focus on painting a picture of the future you aspire to. Discuss the impact you hope to have as a PA, the contributions you wish to make to the healthcare field, and how your unique blend of experiences and passions will enable you to achieve these goals.

Finally, the craft of writing is in revision. Ensure your narrative flows seamlessly, is free of jargon, and is grammatically impeccable. A well-crafted statement is a testament to your attention to detail and your commitment to presenting your best self.

Thank you so much for sharing your experiences and good luck!

Sample Four - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

From the get-go, I’ve been hooked on how the body works and how to heal others. That led me straight to CryoLife, where I was right at the cutting edge of tissue procurement. Surrounded by the preservation of life’s critical elements, I realized my role in healthcare had the potential for significant impact.

My time at CryoLife was far from just clocking in and out. There, I grasped the colossal weight of every decision in healthcare and witnessed the ripple effects of medical breakthroughs and the sheer necessity for professionals who bring both skill and heart to their work. My experiences there are now the bedrock of my ambition to step into the role of a Physician Assistant.

While working in tissue procurement, I spotted a glaring disconnect between the leaps in medical tech and everyday patient care. I saw this gap as my call to action, a space I could help bridge as a PA. Celebrated for its versatility, teamwork, and direct patient engagement, the PA profession struck a chord with me. It presented a platform to channel my scientific insights and fervor for healthcare into a more impactful role.

Another pivotal shift in my understanding happened during an intensive shadowing session at the renowned Johns Hopkins Community Physicians Clinic in Baltimore. Here, I had the opportunity to observe a standout PA, someone whose reputation for blending medical acumen with genuine human connection preceded them. It was a masterclass in patient care, a real game-changer.

As I stepped into the clinic, the energy was palpable. The PA I was shadowing, known for their exceptional skill set and patient rapport, was already in motion. They navigated the day with a kind of finesse that was both inspiring and instructive. It was a whirlwind of activity: from consulting on a challenging chronic illness case to providing acute care with a reassuring calmness, all the while maintaining an undercurrent of empathy and understanding.

It wasn’t just their medical expertise that left an indelible mark on me. It was their approach to patient care. They treated each individual not as a case study but as a human being with a story, fears, and hopes. This PA had an uncanny ability to distill complex medical jargon into understandable, reassuring language, empowering patients to take an active role in their healthcare journey.

One particular scenario stands out. A patient came in, fraught with anxiety about a new diagnosis. The PA didn’t just prescribe a treatment plan; they took the time to sit down, listen, and empathize. They crafted a roadmap to health that considered the patient’s lifestyle, fears, and preferences. It was this patient-centered approach that reframed a life-altering diagnosis into a manageable, collaborative path to wellness.

This experience at Johns Hopkins Community Physicians Clinic showed me what healthcare could and should be. It underscored the profound impact a PA can have in treating diseases and truly enhancing lives. The blend of expertise, compassion, and finesse I witnessed was electrifying. It shifted my perception of what’s possible in patient care and solidified my resolve to pursue this path with all the vigor, dedication, and heart it demands. That’s when it all clicked that this isn’t just a potential career path, but is a calling that resonates with every fiber of my being.

The leap from CryoLife to PA school is a journey of relentless growth, ceaseless learning, and steadfast resolve. It’s marked by endless nights diving into anatomy and physiology, countless hours volunteering, and an insatiable quest to broaden my medical acumen and skill set. This goal is about forging a commitment to uplift healthcare delivery and championing informed, empathetic care.

I’m driven to become a PA who not only forges connections between medical innovation and patient care but also one who truly listens and adds a personal touch to every patient interaction. I’m aiming to contribute to a healthcare system where advanced care and compassion are the norm, not the exception. 

Opting to become a PA is more than a career shift for me. This is my mission. I want to leverage what I’ve learned at CryoLife and scale it up, turning my passion for healthcare into real-world, impactful action. I am ready to face the challenges and seize the opportunities ahead. I’m committed to growing personally, enhancing patient care, and contributing positively to the healthcare field. I’m all in, ready to become a PA who truly makes a difference.

Your personal statement pulsates with a passion for healthcare and a clear vision for your future as a PA. Here are some observations and suggestions to further refine your story:

You weave in snippets of emotional engagement where you witnessed the PA’s empathy impacting patients, but don’t be afraid to tap into your own vulnerabilities. Did observing the PA’s dedication ever push you beyond your comfort zone? Did any patient stories resonate deeply with you?

While you mention “a challenging chronic illness case,” delve into the specifics. Briefly illustrate the complexity of the situation and how the PA navigated it, showcasing their clinical skills.

Describe a specific action you took at CryoLife that exemplifies your understanding of the weight of healthcare decisions. Did you ever contribute to a process that positively impacted a patient’s life?

You identify the disconnect between medical advancements and patient care. Can you elaborate on a specific example? Share an instance where you witnessed this gap at CryoLife, and explain how your PA experience at Johns Hopkins addressed it.

Consider condensing sections like “The leap from CryoLife…” for more space to flesh out impactful moments. Remember, every sentence should count!

Use active voice and strong verbs to make your actions and impact come alive.

Overall, your personal statement showcases a remarkable drive to become a PA who truly makes a difference. By adding emotional depth, showcasing your specific skills and contributions you can craft a captivating narrative that leaves a lasting impression on the admissions committee.

Remember, your story is unique and powerful. Keep refining it with passion and commitment, and you’ll be well on your way to achieving your PA dreams!

Sample Five - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Embarking on a healthcare career is no simple task. It’s demanding and filled with challenges. I often felt a twinge of envy toward those colleagues who had their ‘aha’ moment early on. My path to becoming a Physician Assistant (PA) was more of a gradual realization. It’s a decision that finally made sense halfway through my undergrad studies, aligning seamlessly with my deepest desires: to care, think critically, collaborate, and still keep my family life in full swing.

Growing up in the rural areas of Charlotte, North Carolina, my initial dream was to become a teacher. Why not? I was the kid who aced everything, and my teachers couldn’t stop singing my praises. Those moments of walking up to receive awards weren’t just about recognition. They were about feeling valued and respected. That’s the kind of impact I wanted to have on others.

But then high school happened. With it came an extensive exploration into the world of science. My brain didn’t just like it; it was like I’d discovered a new kind of thirst. Chemistry, in particular, captivated me, leading me to pursue pharmacy in college. But here’s the twist: after a few semesters, I realized that I craved more. I wanted to connect the dots between chemistry and biology, to see how everything works together in the grand scheme of things.

Around this time, my dad’s chronic back pain became a central part of our family story. His struggle wasn’t just a personal issue. It was a stark look into the complexities and gaps in healthcare. We moved from North Carolina to Kansas, and then to Maryland, each move painting a clearer picture of the healthcare system’s challenges. Watching him deal with inconsistent pain management regulations fueled my resolve to dive into a career where I could make a tangible difference.

As my father aged, the impact of his chronic condition became more pronounced, sharpening my focus on the unique challenges faced by the elderly. His journey was not just about pain management; it was about navigating a healthcare system that often seemed indifferent to the nuanced needs of older patients. I witnessed firsthand how age compounded his struggles, making me acutely aware of the delicate balance required in treating older adults.

This realization hit home during my time in the emergency department. I saw elderly patients who, like my father, needed more than just medical intervention. They needed empathy, patience, and a healthcare system that recognized the complex interplay between aging, chronic conditions, and mental health. These experiences didn’t just shape my understanding of healthcare; they honed my desire to specialize in geriatrics. I wanted to be a PA who could not only address the physical ailments but also understand the comprehensive care that our elders deserve.

My father’s story, my clinical observations, and my passion for geriatric care became the threads that wove together my career aspirations. Each thread reinforced my commitment to dive deeper into a field where I could make a meaningful impact, especially for the aging population. My goal became clear: to blend my medical knowledge with a compassionate understanding of geriatric needs, ensuring that every elder, like my father, receives the respect, care, and dignity they deserve in their twilight years.

Fast forward a bit, and I found myself working as a medical scribe in the emergency department at BWMC. Talk about a learning curve! This experience was like a crash course in the realities of patient care and the healthcare system. It was here that I realized the PA path was the one for me. It’s a role that’s all about adaptability, teamwork, and crucially, maintaining a balance between a rewarding career and a fulfilling personal life.

After college, I stepped into the shoes of an EMT, and every day reaffirmed my decision. There’s something about the anticipation of an emergency call, the immediate application of my skills, and the profound impact on someone’s life that just feels right.

Here’s the bottom line: becoming a PA isn’t just a career choice for me. It’s a calling. It’s about blending empathy with analytical thinking, about being part of a team that’s bigger than any one individual. And let’s not forget about the importance of family life. I’m all in on a profession that allows me to excel in caring for others while also cherishing those precious moments at home. As I look ahead, I’m not just excited. I’m ready to embrace the challenges and opportunities that await. The journey to becoming a PA is a path I’m committed to, every step of the way.

PA School Personal Statement Expert Commentary

Your personal statement already has a strong narrative flow and captures a clear sense of your journey towards becoming a PA. Here are some suggestions for further refinement:

While you describe key experiences, like your father’s illness and the emergency calls, consider diving deeper into the emotional resonance. Describe specific moments of vulnerability, the satisfaction of seeing your skills make a difference, or the lessons learned from challenges.

You mention aspects like adaptability, teamwork, and balancing career with family. Show how these qualities manifested in your past experiences and connect them directly to the desired skills of a PA. Explain how these experiences equipped you to thrive in the PA role.

Some sections (“growing up…teacher”) could be condensed, giving you more space to flesh out impactful moments. Use active voice and strong verbs to make your actions and impact come alive.

Briefly mention any awards, recognitions, or leadership roles you’ve held. These showcase your potential and dedication within the healthcare field.

Remember, your personal statement is a story about you and your path to becoming a PA. Make it personal, relatable, and impactful. By adding emotional depth, linking your experiences to PA skills, and highlighting your unique focus, you can create a statement that leaves a lasting impression on the admissions committee.

Overall, you’re on the right track! Keep refining, emphasizing your strengths, and telling your story with passion. The journey to becoming a PA is a noble one, and your statement should reflect your dedication and enthusiasm.

Sample Six - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

Witnessing my neighbors’ quiet resilience in battling chronic conditions with limited resources ignited a deep desire within me: to bridge the gap between their isolation and the comprehensive medical care they deserved.

While many pre-med students crave the sterile precision of laboratory research, I longed for the raw immediacy of wilderness medicine. Emergency Medical Services, with its blend of clinical expertise and adaptability, became my calling. I envisioned myself not just as another EMT, but as a roving mountain-top medic, a guardian angel navigating treacherous trails and icy winds.

My weapon would not be a megaphone, but a backpack stocked with medical supplies and boundless resourcefulness. Volunteering with the local search and rescue team became my proving ground. Each rescued hiker, each stabilized injury in the biting cold, solidified my conviction. From calming the panic of a lost child to coaxing a heartbeat back into a frostbitten climber, these interactions affirmed my purpose: to be more than a cog in the healthcare machine, but a beacon of hope in the vast wilderness.

The path to becoming a Physician Assistant isn’t a leisurely mountain hike. There were nights spent shivering in windswept tents, battling exhaustion and the unpredictable forces of nature. There were moments of self-doubt, staring into the abyss of helplessness during critical incidents. Yet, it was in these crucible moments that my resolve hardened. Each challenge became a summit conquered, each doubt a whisper on the wind, leaving behind a steadfast determination to reach the peak.

Now, as I sit down to write this personal statement, it’s not about accolades or certifications. As a mountaintop medic within, the one who found his battlefield not in concrete canyons, but in the rugged embrace of nature, it’s a promise, etched in the ink of unwavering conviction, to be not just a Physician Assistant, but a tireless advocate for rural healthcare access, a weaver of safety in the face of adversity, and a testament to the unwavering spirit of human resilience against nature’s challenges.

So, let me not be another face in the crowd of aspiring PAs. I have a vision, the silent warrior who finds solace in service, whose heart beats in sync with the pulse of rural communities. Because, at the end of the day, it’s not about accolades or test scores, but about the fire that burns within.

Mateo, your personal statement is a lyrical and vivid narrative that beautifully captures your passion and commitment to wilderness medicine. However, while your poetic language and dramatic storytelling are compelling, they might overshadow the concrete details and experiences that PA programs often look for in candidates.

Admissions committees are interested in understanding your direct experiences with healthcare, your knowledge of the PA profession, and your ability to communicate clearly and professionally. While your desire to be a “mountaintop medic” is inspiring, it’s important to ground your aspirations in reality and focus on how your experiences have prepared you for the practical and diverse responsibilities of a Physician Assistant.

Consider toning down some of the more dramatic language and metaphors to ensure your genuine experiences and qualifications shine through. Balance the poetic narrative with clear, specific details about your clinical experiences, the skills you’ve gained, and how they’ve solidified your decision to pursue the PA profession. Reflect on the moments that have truly tested and shaped you, and share these in a way that demonstrates your readiness and suitability for a career as a PA.

Remember, while your unique perspective and storytelling are valuable, clarity and relevance are key in a personal statement. By weaving your poetic narrative with concrete experiences and a clear understanding of the PA profession, you can create a compelling and professional statement that truly reflects who you are and the dedicated PA you aspire to become.

Sample Seven - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

My mother, Maria, was my first introduction to the world of healthcare. Her experiences navigating the complex system to provide for our family painted a vivid picture of the healthcare disparities that plague many communities. Witnessing her persistence and dedication, I was moved by a deep resolve to make a difference. It was her strength and endurance that sparked my desire to become an agent of change in the medical world.

At the University of Texas at San Antonio, I pursued a degree in Health Sciences with more than just academic achievement in mind. Each lecture, each assignment was a step toward a larger goal – to understand and dismantle the barriers to healthcare accessibility. Dr. Aisha Patel, my mentor, played a crucial role in this journey. She taught me more than just medical knowledge; she emphasized the importance of empathy and cultural competence in healthcare, lessons that resonated with my own experiences and aspirations.

My time as an intern at the San Antonio Community Health Center was transformative. There, I met Mr. Jose Martinez, a Physician Assistant whose dedication and warmth profoundly influenced my career path. Witnessing his direct impact on patients’ lives, his ability to bridge gaps in care, and his role as an advocate for the community, I saw a future for myself. It was clear to me then that my calling was to be a PA, someone who could make a tangible difference in people’s lives every day.

I remember vividly one instance where he spent hours with a patient who had been navigating the complex maze of healthcare for years, with little to no success. Mr. Martinez listened patiently, addressed her concerns with genuine care, and devised a plan that was both medically sound and emotionally reassuring. It was a profound moment for me, witnessing the transformative power of compassionate care.

As I continued my internship, I observed Mr. Martinez’s interactions with a diverse array of patients, each with their own unique stories and struggles. He treated each case with the same level of dedication, whether it was a routine check-up or a complex chronic condition. His ability to bridge gaps in care was particularly inspiring. He had an intuitive understanding of the social determinants of health that often hinder access to care — things like language barriers, socioeconomic status, and cultural stigmas. He navigated these challenges with grace and skill, working tirelessly to ensure that every patient received the care they needed.

His role as an advocate for the community was equally impactful. I saw him attend town hall meetings, participate in health fairs, and collaborate with local organizations to promote health education and resources. He was a staunch believer in preventative care and often said that a significant part of healthcare happens outside the clinic’s walls. He was right. His efforts extended far beyond individual patient interactions; he was actively involved in shaping a healthier, more informed community.

This experience illuminated the vast potential of the PA profession. It wasn’t just about the clinical skills and medical knowledge, though those were certainly important. It was about the ability to connect with patients on a human level, to understand their lives and concerns, and to advocate for their well-being. It was about being a crucial link between the patient and the often intimidating world of healthcare.

My resolve to become a PA, someone who could make a tangible difference in people’s lives every day, was solidified during this time. I began to envision a future where I, too, could provide such comprehensive, compassionate care. I imagined being the one to alleviate fears, manage treatments, and celebrate health milestones with my patients. The thought of being a part of their support system, as well as their healthcare journey, was both exhilarating and humbling.

This vision for my future was not just about a professional title; it was about embodying the qualities I admired in Mr. Martinez. It was about striving to be a source of comfort, a pillar of strength, and a partner in health for every patient I would have the privilege of serving. I started to see each lecture, each assignment, and each clinical experience at the University of Texas at San Antonio not just as steps toward a degree but as building blocks for the kind of PA I wanted to become.

The lessons I learned during my internship extended beyond clinical skills. I learned the importance of cultural competence, of understanding the community I serve, and of continually educating myself about the evolving needs of patients. I learned that healthcare is not a one-size-fits-all system but a tapestry of individual stories, each requiring a personalized approach.

The PA profession stands out to me for its dynamic and versatile nature. It offers a direct involvement in patient care, the flexibility to work across various specialties, and, most importantly, the opportunity to make an immediate impact on individuals and communities. This career path aligns with my passion for healthcare and my commitment to serve and advocate for those often left behind in the healthcare system.

My pursuit to become a Physician Assistant is a personal one, a commitment I’ve made to my mother, my community, and myself to strive for a healthcare system where quality care is accessible to all. As I prepare to apply to PA schools, I carry the wisdom of my mentors, the strength of my community, and a clear vision for the future.

My desire to become a Physician Assistant is about combining medical proficiency with a heart for service. It’s about being more than just a healthcare provider; it’s about being a catalyst for change, a voice for the underserved, and a source of comfort and healing. 

As I stand ready to embrace the challenges of PA school, I am driven by a passion for service and a commitment to ensuring equitable healthcare for every individual. I am Sofia ________, and I am eager to tackle the challenges of PA school and emerge as a dedicated healthcare professional, ready to make a meaningful impact, one patient at a time.

Your story starts with a powerful personal connection to healthcare through your mother’s struggles. You seamlessly weave in your academic journey, impactful mentorship, and defining internship experience, showcasing your motivations and growth.

You provide concrete details about Mr. Martinez’s approach and interactions with patients, making your experiences come alive. This strengthens your connection to the PA profession and your desire to emulate him. Your dedication to providing equitable healthcare and advocating for underserved communities shines through. The ending statement effectively summarizes your aspirations and drive.

Your statement currently exceeds the 5000 character limit by approximately 1000 characters. To stay within the limit, consider condensing some non-essential details. While specifics are valuable, avoid overly lengthy descriptions. Focus on the most impactful moments and insights. Look for redundant phrases or unnecessary words you can streamline to save space.

Focus on the internship experience and other interactions that most strongly solidified your desire to become a PA. You can briefly mention other aspects like your degree program but with less detail.

You mention community involvement but it could be more prominent. Briefly describe specific instances where you advocated for or directly served your community in a healthcare context. This further strengthens your commitment to the underserved.

This is a strong personal statement with a clear focus and a passionate voice. By refining it for conciseness while emphasizing your community service and staying within the word limit, you can create a truly impactful application piece.

Consider asking a trusted friend or advisor to review your statement for clarity and impact. Remember, your story is unique and powerful. Keep refining it with confidence and your passion for healthcare will shine through.

I hope this feedback helps you polish your personal statement and achieve your PA dream!

Sample Eight - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

A tremor of anxiety gripped an elderly man, his swollen wrist radiating pain. Dr. Johnson knelt beside him, not with sterile detachment, but with a warmth that melted his fear. His gentle reassurance, his clear explanation, immediately changed the man’s panicked pleas into a quiet trust. That day, working at Washington Regional Medical Center as a medical scribe, my own ambition was crystallized by Dr. Johnson’s skills. I knew then that I had to become a PA, a conduit of both medical expertise and empathetic understanding, a beacon of hope to those in Fayetteville.

At the University of Arkansas, beyond the theoretical, I craved real-world immersion. As an Emergency Medical Technician, I felt the adrenaline rush of ambulance rides and  the pressure of split-second decisions. Holding hands under harsh headlights, whispering comfort into the storm of pain, I honed my ability to remain calm under fire, to connect with patients even in the most frantic moments. These experiences were not just tests of courage, but masterclasses in communication, skills vital for a future PA.

Returning to the controlled chaos of the ER as a medical scribe, I gained an insider’s view of the PA’s dynamic role. Documenting patient encounters, I watched them navigate complex diagnoses, deliver treatments with quiet confidence, and educate with genuine patience. Their versatility, their ability to forge deep connections with patients, resonated with me. They were the healers I aspired to be, skilled, knowledgeable, and unwavering in their dedication.

My commitment to healthcare extends beyond personal aspirations. In Fayetteville’s underserved communities, I’ve volunteered countless hours at the Community Clinic, providing basic medical care and a listening ear. Here, I’ve learned that health is a tapestry woven not just from biology, but from cultural threads, economic burdens, and personal stories. This experience has instilled in me a profound sense of social responsibility, a commitment to become a part of the community I serve, not just another provider passing through.

Now, on the cusp of a new chapter, I’m ready for the academic and clinical training of a PA program. My foundation, built on a solid understanding of biological sciences, sharpened by EMT experiences, and seasoned by medical scribing insights, awaits further refinement. This program is the gateway to actualizing my dream – serving Fayetteville as a compassionate, competent healthcare provider.

I see myself listening to their stories, easing their anxieties, and empowering them with knowledge. I see myself contributing to Fayetteville’s healthcare landscape, perhaps even inspiring the next generation of medical professionals. My commitment isn’t solely to mastering clinical skills, but to a lifelong journey of understanding the human aspect of medicine.

Becoming a PA is undoubtedly challenging, a relentless climb through studies and demanding rotations. Yet, I am unfazed. I’ll meet each challenge with my resolve forged in the ER, the lessons learned under the flashing lights of ambulances, and the empathy nurtured within Fayetteville’s diverse communities. These experiences are my foundation, a unwavering pledge to embark on this journey with dedication and resilience.

Becoming a PA is a vow to a lifetime of learning, service, and unwavering compassion. It’s about becoming a beacon of hope in someone’s hour of need, a role I am eager and prepared to assume. As I stand before the gateway to a PA program, I do so with a clear vision of the future I wish to create, armed with the knowledge, experiences, and dedication that will guide me in becoming a compassionate, skilled Physician Assistant, forever dedicated to the health and well-being of my community.

Truly captivating intro! The opening scene in the ER with Dr. Johnson immediately draws the reader in and sets the stage for your unwavering pursuit of becoming a Physician Assistant. Your vivid descriptions, from the ER to the “pressure of split-second decisions” as an EMT, bring your experiences to life. You effectively showcase your well-rounded skillset by highlighting your academic foundation in biology, hands-on experience as an EMT and medical scribe, and community service at the clinic. This demonstrates your comprehensive preparation for the PA role.

However, to further strengthen your statement, consider expanding the emotional impact of your experiences. How did witnessing Dr. Johnson’s empathy resonate with you? Did connecting with patients at the clinic shift your understanding of healthcare in a personal way? Exploring these emotional pointers will connect with readers on a deeper level.

Weaving your connection to Fayetteville more thoroughly throughout the statement is another step towards an even stronger piece. Instead of simply mentioning it, highlight specific challenges or needs of the community and how your experiences or aspirations align with addressing them. This demonstrates a deeper understanding of Fayetteville and your commitment to serving it.

Finally, tighten the ending by emphasizing your unique strengths and unwavering commitment to becoming a PA. Avoid repetition and stay within the 5000-character limit. This will leave a lasting impression on the admission committee.

Remember, your personal statement is your unique story. Infuse it with your voice and emotions to truly make it stand out. I hope this feedback helps you create an even more powerful piece!

Sample Nine - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

In the beautiful surroundings of my hometown, Beaufort, South Carolina, where the sea breeze carries echoes of community spirit, I was influenced by the experiences and stories shared by local healthcare professionals, including my mother, a dedicated nurse at Beaufort Memorial Hospital. Her experiences, filled with challenges and victories, served as my earliest insight into the world of empathetic healthcare.

Growing up in Beaufort, I was part of a community where each individual’s story contributed to the collective experience of our town. My mother would return from work  with insights and experiences that resonated with the genuine spirit of hope and healing. These stories were real-life examples of the impact compassionate care can have on individuals and communities alike.

My academic path led me to Clemson University, where I pursued a degree in Biological Sciences. The Palmetto Fellows Scholarship acknowledged my academic efforts, but it was the people and experiences around me that truly shaped my aspirations. I worked with a student-run clinic, providing free basic healthcare to underserved populations. This experience was more than an educational pursuit; it was a profound lesson in the joy of service and the real-world impact of medical care.

After Clemson, I became a certified nursing assistant at Hilton Head Hospital. Each day presented a new set of challenges and learning opportunities. I navigated the complex landscape of patient care, learning the importance of empathetic communication and teamwork. Beyond my role at the hospital, I volunteered at a local free clinic, where I encountered diverse stories of life and health, further deepening my understanding of the socioeconomic factors affecting healthcare access.

My path has been guided by personal attributes like calmness under pressure, keen observational skills, and a natural inclination towards compassion. These qualities have not only influenced my interactions but have also solidified my desire to pursue a career as a Physician Assistant. This profession, to me, represents patient advocacy and delivering quality healthcare where it is most needed.

I want to specialize in family medicine and that is driven by my desire to foster community health comprehensively, addressing preventive care and chronic disease management. I envision myself returning to a community like Beaufort or one with a similar spirit, where I can contribute as a medical professional, advocating for accessible health education and initiatives that address health disparities.

I am equipped with the lessons from my past, the knowledge from my education, and the insights from my experiences as a CNA and volunteer. I am prepared to to become a Physician Assistant, as I am motivated by a dedication to service and an eagerness to meet the challenges and rewards that lie ahead. My commitment to becoming a source of hope and healing, like my mom, lines up perfectly with the PA life-path. I know that it is the right way for me.

Your personal statement paints a lovely picture of your journey towards becoming a Physician Assistant, rooted in your Beaufort upbringing and fueled by your mother’s dedication. While it showcases strong motivation and aspirations, consider more specific details to truly captivate the reader and demonstrate your unique qualities.

Instead of describing Beaufort’s general atmosphere, paint a vivid picture of a specific interaction or anecdote that exemplifies the community spirit and its impact on you. Did witnessing your mother’s connection with a patient solidify your desire for compassionate care?

Go beyond “joy of service” at the student-run clinic or “deepening understanding” at the free clinic. How did these experiences affect you emotionally? Did a specific patient story touch your heart or challenge your perspectives?

Show, don’t tell, calming under pressure , rather than stating this quality, illustrate it through an anecdote. Did you remain calm while assisting a frantic patient in the hospital or during a challenging situation at the free clinic? Show your composure in action.

Give an example of how your observations led to a positive outcome. Did you notice a subtle symptom that helped diagnose a patient or anticipate a potential concern?

Specificity matters, describe specific challenges you faced in each experience, not just generalizations. Did language barriers at the free clinic present difficulties? Did you encounter ethical dilemmas as a CNA that tested your decision-making? Share how you overcame these challenges and the lessons learned.

Use the additional characters to delve deeper into your experiences and motivations. Instead of broad explanations, focus on impactful moments that showcase your skills, compassion, and dedication to patient care.

Remember, your personal statement is your story. Make it personal, specific, and emotionally resonant. Show, don’t tell, and let your genuine passion for becoming a PA shine through. By incorporating these suggestions, you can transform your already commendable statement into a truly unforgettable narrative that stands out from the crowd.

Sample Ten - Physician Assistant Personal Statement

I am Sakthi                      , a dedicated individual from the community-oriented city of Charlottesville, Virginia. I approach you with a genuine and purposeful intention, seeking to join your esteemed Physician Assistant program. This step is not just an academic progression for me but a pivotal move towards realizing my ambition of specializing in geriatric care.

My passion for healthcare was catalyzed by my tenure as a Certified Nurse Assistant at Oakwood Nursing Home. This role has been an all-encompassing experience that significantly sculpted my perspective on healthcare. Daily, I am presented with a spectrum of challenges and victories, each one offering a unique lesson and deepening my understanding of patient care. I have learned the art of offering solace during moments of distress and the joy of sharing laughter, affirming that healthcare’s true essence is found in these everyday interactions.

At Oakwood, I have grasped the multifaceted nature of healing. Effective healthcare goes well-beyond the clinical duties of medication administration or wound dressing. I have found that it’s about a profound human connection, the reassuring hand in moments of vulnerability, the careful listening to concerns often dismissed, and the personalized approach to each patient’s journey. I transitioned from a caregiver to a trusted confidant, advocate, and a compassionate friend. I have deepened my connection with patients and reshaped my understanding of healthcare, emphasizing the importance of empathy and communication.

Each day at Oakwood brings me face-to-face with the unique challenges the elderly face, from chronic illnesses to the emotional struggle of feeling forgotten. These encounters have braced my resolve to specialize in geriatric care but also enriched my perception of the profound impact a healthcare professional can have. As a Physician Assistant, my goal is to extend beyond the role of a medical professional. I aspire to be a pillar of support, offering care that is both dignified and personalized.

My experiences at Oakwood are complemented by my academic journey at the University of Virginia. My coursework in Health Sciences have provided me with a solid foundation in the principles of human health, disease, and the psychosocial aspects influencing healthcare. Classes like anatomy and public health opened my eyes to the scientific and societal facets of healthcare, equipping me with a comprehensive understanding that I apply daily at Oakwood.

One particular event that stands out in my memory is the time I spent with Mrs. Helen, a resident with no immediate family. Our conversations, filled with her life stories, her joys, and her regrets, were not just a window into her past but a lesson in humility and the human spirit. Her resilience in the face of loneliness and age-related health issues taught me the importance of compassionate companionship in healthcare. It was during these conversations that I fully realized the impact a dedicated healthcare professional can have on an individual’s life.

My experiences with patient interactions have been profoundly educational. I’ve celebrated milestones, listened to decades’ worth of stories, and provided comfort in the most vulnerable times. These moments, though emotionally intense, have been an extraordinary privilege and a constant reminder of the impact compassionate care can have. They’ve instilled in me the understanding that the quality of life is as vital as its duration, especially in the later years.

I am eager to bring my depth of understanding and unwavering commitment to your program. I believe that the role of a Physician Assistant is to not only treat but also to nurture, not just to heal the body but to uplift the spirit. With the education and skills I will gain from your institution, I am confident in my ability to make a meaningful difference in the lives of the elderly.

I look forward to the opportunity to discuss how my experiences, both personal and academic, align with the values and aspirations of your program. I am ready for this next step and excited about the potential to expand my knowledge and refine my skills in geriatric care.

Hey Sakthi,

I have to say, your passion for geriatric care shines through your personal statement! I especially loved how you highlighted your experiences at Oakwood and your connection with Mrs. Helen. Those moments speak volumes about your empathy and dedication to this population.

However, as someone who reads these statements all the time, I can offer some tips to take your essay from good to stellar:

Remember, PAs live and breathe the details. Ditch the generic phrases and paint a picture for me. Instead of saying you “offered solace,” tell me about the time you held Mrs. Smith’s hand through a tough diagnosis, making her feel less alone. Let me hear the laughter you shared with Mr. Jones during his therapy session, proving that healthcare isn’t just about pills and procedures.

You’ve laid out your experiences and your passion, but how do they make you a perfect PA candidate? Explain how your skills at Oakwood – building trust, advocating for patients, navigating complex needs – translate directly into the PA role. Show me you understand the collaborative nature of our profession and how you’ll seamlessly integrate into a healthcare team.

What ignited your passion for geriatrics? Was it a personal experience, a societal issue, or the unique challenges they face? Sharing your “why” adds another layer of depth and helps the admissions committee understand what drives you.

Some sections feel repetitive. Condense, reorganize, and craft a narrative that builds and crescendos, leaving a lasting impression. Remember, word count matters! Tighten up your language, use action verbs, and make every sentence count.

Typos and grammatical errors scream “rookie mistake.” Make sure your essay is polished and professional, a reflection of the meticulous care you’ll bring to your future patients.

Finally, tailor your statement to the specific program. Research their mission, values, and areas of focus. Show them you’ve done your homework and why their program is the perfect fit for your aspirations.

Sakthi, you have a compelling foundation here. By incorporating these tips and refining your story, you’ll craft a personal statement that grabs attention, showcases your potential, and lands you that coveted spot in your dream PA program. I’m rooting for you!

Now That You’ve Completed Your PA Personal Statement

So, you’ve crafted a compelling personal statement, woven with your experiences and motivations for pursuing Physician Assisting. But the process doesn’t end there. Your statement becomes the springboard for the next critical hurdle: the PA school interview. Here’s how to seamlessly bridge the gap between those powerful words and your live performance.

From Inkwell to Interview Chair

Know your score : Revisit your personal statement regularly. Relive the emotions, identify key points, and anticipate potential questions the interviewers might ask based on your narrative.

Practice makes perfect : Don’t wait for the interview to rehearse. Mock interviews with peers or faculty can help you articulate your experiences with confidence and nuance.

Beyond the bullets : While your statement lays the foundation, prepare anecdotes and deeper explanations to flesh out your experiences. Don’t just recite facts; show the interviewers the heart behind your motivations.

Unveiling the Canvas

Expect the expected : Common questions regarding your career goals, clinical experiences, and challenges faced are inevitable. Prepare concise and compelling answers that showcase your strengths and growth.

Beyond the prompt : Your statement acts as a conversation starter, not an ending point. Be prepared to elaborate on specific situations, delve into the emotions and lessons learned, and connect them to your overall passion for PA.

Connecting the dots : Use your statement as a springboard to discuss new developments. Did you gain additional experiences since writing it? Have your aspirations evolved? Weave these updates seamlessly into the narrative.

Remember : The interview is a two-way street. Use the opportunity to ask insightful questions about the program, faculty, and learning environment. This demonstrates your proactive nature and genuine interest in becoming part of their community.

In essence, your personal statement is not just a piece of paper, but a blueprint for your interview success. Embrace its essence, prepare to breathe life into your experiences, and remember, the PA school interview is your chance to translate your personal score into the symphony of your passion, one note, one answer, one life at a time.

Polishing Your PA School Application

Your personal statement might be the heart of your application, but it’s not the whole story. To truly stand out in the competitive world of PA school admissions, you need a well-rounded, cohesive package. Here’s how to go beyond the statement and build an application that shines.

Professional Polish: Admissions Consulting

Deciding whether to utilize PA school admissions consulting can be a strategic move. Consider seeking professional guidance if:

• You’re unfamiliar with the application process.
• You struggle to articulate your experiences convincingly.
• You need help crafting effective essays or tailoring your application to specific schools.
• You’re looking for an objective perspective and feedback on your application materials.

However, remember that consultants cannot guarantee admission. You must still possess the academic aptitude, clinical experience, and genuine passion for the field. Consider your budget and research reputable consultants before making a decision.

Letters of Recommendation

Strong letters of recommendation can provide additional layers to your application, showcasing your strengths and potential from different perspectives. Choose recommenders who:

• Know you well, ideally in a professional or academic setting.
• Can speak to your skills, work ethic, and commitment to PA.
• Can provide specific examples of your achievements and contributions.

Give your recommenders ample time and necessary materials to write impactful letters. Remember, they are your advocates, so choose wisely and show your appreciation for their support.

GPA, Scores, and Patient Care Hours

While your personal statement is the main part, other elements like GPA, test scores, and direct patient care hours play crucial supporting roles. Aim for:

• A competitive GPA : While minimum requirements vary, strive for a GPA that demonstrates your academic ability to handle the rigors of PA school.
• Solid test scores : Consult program requirements and prepare diligently for standardized tests like the GRE or MCAT.
• Meaningful patient care hours : Gain valuable clinical experience through shadowing, volunteering, or working in healthcare settings. Quality over quantity is key – choose experiences that provide diverse exposure and demonstrate your hands-on skills.

Remember, each application component tells a different part of your story. Ensure they’re well-harmonized, showcasing your well-rounded potential and unwavering dedication to becoming a Physician Assistant.

By strategically navigating these additional elements, you can create an application that resonates with admissions committees. Go beyond the personal statement, build a symphony of strengths, and let your passion for PA take center stage.

Resources and Next Steps

As you approach the final stages of your application and prepare your PA personal statement, we’ve compiled a list of valuable resources to guide you further. These links offer extensive information on various aspects of the Physician Assistant profession, PA school requirements, and practical advice to enhance your journey.

Your Definitive Guide to PA School Requirements and Prerequisites

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Most Common PA School Admissions Questions: Most Common Questions

This article addresses frequently asked questions about PA school admissions, providing insights into what admissions committees look for and tips for navigating the process. An invaluable resource for preparing for your PA school interview questions.

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Understand the key differences between Physician Assistants and Doctors, helping clarify your career aspirations and inform your Physician Assistant personal statement.

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Explore lucrative career paths within the PA profession and consider how specializing might align with your interests and goals.

How to Get Into PA School: Getting Into PA School

Gain strategic insights and practical advice on enhancing your application, perfecting your Physician Assistant personal statement, and successfully navigating the admissions process.

How to Get Patient Care Hours for PA School Without Certification: Patient Care Hours

Discover ways to accumulate direct patient care hours for PA school, a crucial component of your application.

Best Pre-Physician Assistant Majors: Pre-PA Majors

Choose the right undergraduate major to prepare for PA school and make your application more competitive.

Physician Assistant School Rankings: 15 Best PA Schools in the United States: PA School Rankings

Target top-ranked PA schools in your applications and understand what makes these programs stand out.

How Much Do Physician Assistants Make in 2023? PA Salary Reports and More: PA Salary Reports

Get informed about the earning potential of Physician Assistants, aiding in your long-term career planning.

As you navigate through these resources, maintain a proactive and thoughtful approach. Reflect on how each piece of information can strengthen your application, from enriching your PA personal statement to acing your interviews. Remember, thorough preparation and a deep understanding of the PA profession will serve as your stepping stones to success.

Parting Thoughts

As we wrap up this comprehensive guide to mastering your PA school personal statement, let’s recall the pivotal role this document plays in your journey to becoming a Physician Assistant. Your personal statement is a reflection of your passion, dedication, and the unique path that has led you to this moment. It’s your opportunity to stand out, to show the admissions committee not just who you are, but who you aspire to become.

We encourage a proactive and thoughtful approach to writing and revising your personal statement. Start early, allowing yourself ample time to reflect on your experiences, motivations, and the impact you wish to make as a PA. Be open to feedback, but also trust your voice and the authenticity of your narrative. Remember, a compelling personal statement is not written in a day, but crafted through introspection, dedication, and a willingness to share your journey.

Pursuing a career as a Physician Assistant is a noble and challenging endeavor. It requires academic excellence and clinical expertise, but also a heart driven by service, empathy, and a commitment to improving lives. Your journey might be fraught with challenges, but the impact you’ll make as a PA will be immeasurably rewarding.

Keep in mind the resources available to you. Whether it’s seeking advice from mentors, utilizing our PA school admissions consulting , or revisiting the additional resources provided in this guide, remember that you’re not alone in this process. Each step you take is a step toward a future where you’ll make a significant difference in the healthcare field.

In closing, we applaud your determination and commend your dedication to becoming a Physician Assistant. So, take a deep breath, trust in your preparation, and embrace the journey ahead with confidence and optimism. The path to becoming a PA is within reach, and your story, your personal statement, is just the beginning.

International Medical Aid provides  global internship opportunities  for students and clinicians who are looking to broaden their horizons and experience healthcare on an international level. These program participants have the unique opportunity to shadow healthcare providers as they treat individuals who live in remote and underserved areas and who don’t have easy access to medical attention. International Medical Aid also provides  medical school admissions consulting  to individuals applying to medical school and PA school programs. We review primary and secondary applications, offer guidance for personal statements and essays, and conduct mock interviews to prepare you for the admissions committees that will interview you before accepting you into their programs. IMA is here to provide the tools you need to help further your career and expand your opportunities in healthcare.

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PA Personal Statement: The Definitive Guide

Including 8 pa school personal statement examples.

Your PA personal statement is one of the most important PA school requirements . Writing a stellar PA personal statement is difficult for many students, however, this statement is vital for distinguishing your application from all the others and getting into the best PA schools . A well-crafted, memorable statement is your golden ticket to a PA school interview, so in today's blog, you'll learn what to include in your PA personal statement, common mistakes to avoid and you'll even be able to review PA personal statement examples.

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Pa personal statement example #1.

During my kindergarten graduation, I walked on stage and gave my exit speech: “When I grow up, I want to be a teacher because it’s easy.” Reflecting back, I see the comedy in my naivety as every profession has its own unique challenges. I had no intention to pursue medicine, as I often had a sense of jealousy towards the field. Growing up, my mother was also attending school, first undergraduate then medical school. Exposed to the rigor and competition of higher education, she felt the need to share the importance of dedicating my time to education. While my classmates had work-free weekends, I spent my time completing extra homework, assigned by my mother. Initially, I misinterpreted her teachings as favoritism for studies over spending our days indulging in games.

My passion to become a physician assistant took root the day my grandmother fell from the top of a ladder. My mother shouted for my help with two simple tasks: grab a blanket and call 911. Trapped by fear and hesitation, I was unable to react. This response may seem understandable; however, I was my harshest critic and felt shame from my inability to aid. Sitting in the hospital waiting room, I reflected on my actions and vowed to never again be a mere observer. With this experience, my outlook on the medical field began to change from that of jealousy to intrigue. I started to understand that my mother’s intentions were not to spend less time with me but rather she aspired to be in a position where she could offer herself to support others, an attribute I strive to emulate. My kindergarten dreams to teach were expanded to embody care and compassion, with goals to empower and provide protection to others feeling helpless.

Aware of my lack of knowledge pertaining to handling trauma, I enrolled in an emergency medical response course that equipped me with the skills to handle unforeseen situations, and the strength to grow from criticism. Others questioned my ability to complete this physically rigorous course, given that my stature is a mere four feet and nine inches. Using this criticism as motivation, I excelled in the course and partook in a twelve-hour responder shift. This exhilarating experience strengthened my ambition to study medicine, as my interests lie in the shortcomings of human-design.

• This statement utilizes strong transitional sentences to link paragraphs which creates an easy-to-read essay with excellent flow.
• At the end of each experience, this student does an excellent job of reflecting. They discuss what they learned, why it was significant, and how it will help them in a career in medicine.
• Instead of discussing a variety of different experiences, the student focussed on quality experiences over quantity. This allows each experience, whether the experience with their grandmother or the experience as an emergency medical responder to really develop throughout the essay, ultimately creating a unifying theme that ties together well in the conclusion.
• The essay really comes to life due to the inclusion of details that describe experiences and interactions that were significant to the student such as time spent with their grandmother and patient interactions during shadowing.

The PA school personal statement is one of the most important of the PA school requirements .

Before you begin writing your physician assistant personal statement, it's important to understand the purpose of the personal statement. Essentially, your personal statement will serve as your introduction to admissions committees. It's a way for you to demonstrate why you have chosen to pursue medicine, and why you want to become a PA specifically.

Admissions committees want to understand where your first interest in becoming a physician assistant began, what memorable experiences you've had since that moment, and what steps you've taken towards turning that initial interest into desire and passion for the profession. As with all types of personal statements, your personal statement must address the “why” behind the profession. In this case, why do you want to be a PA? Why did you choose PA school over a related discipline, such as medical school or nursing school? What about the PA profession appeals to you and what have you done to explore the field? What contribution can you make to the PA profession?

Your PA personal statement is the first introduction of who you are and serves as a first impression to the admissions committees. It’s also a way to clinch a PA school interview and move on to the final round of admissions evaluations.

Keep in mind that you'll also be expected to answer this question, and other common PA school interview questions during your interview, so be sure to reflect a bit on your answer and craft a strong response for both your personal statement and your interview answer. Similar questions to this can come up during your PA school interview essay or you can explore your “why” when you’re asked “tell me about yourself” during your interview.

In short, your personal statement is an important tool to getting through the initial rounds of PA school admissions, it provides background information on you to admissions committees and puts a face to your application.

Here's a summary of the requirements for PA school:

How to Write A Killer PA Personal Statement

#1 be honest..

No two personal statements should be alike, each person has had their own set of experiences that have led them to want to pursue this vocation. So don't try to fabricate your statement or exaggerate your experiences. Instead, be honest, tell the admissions committees about your exposure to medicine, what you've learned, how you've grown, what you have accomplished, why it was important and how all of these experiences led to you wanting to become a PA. Don’t try to butter up the admissions committee or make grand statements. Stick to the main reasons why you want to be a PA and why you want to pursue the profession specifically.

#2 Highlight your experiences and skills appropriately.

You want to highlight a few experiences that have helped you understand more about the life and work of a PA and ultimately helped solidify your decision to pursue this field. You can talk about your reasons for choosing PA vs MD if its relevant to your experience. Reflect on the instances that sparked your interest in the field or made you consider a career as a PA. Think about your volunteering, shadowing, and clinical experiences and reflect on any moments that have stood out for you or were significant in developing your interest in the profession. Remember to use details and specific examples to highlight the skills and lessons you earned from these experiences. Perhaps your participation in creating a treatment plan for a particular patient stood out for you or you witnessed an interaction between a physician assistant and a patient during your shadowing that gave you further insight into the profession. In short, you need to be able to answer why the PA is the best route for you, and what you’ve done to prepare yourself for this career.

Additionally, you can draw on related experiences and skills you’ve developed that will help you reach your goals as a future PA. For example, if you want to work specifically with underserved communities, and you’ve taken on volunteering opportunities that put you into contact with such communities, this is a great experience to include in both your personal statement or as some of the best extracurriculars for PA school . If you want to work among immigrant or refugee communities and took the time to learn a new language in order to better communicate with these individuals, that will not only show initiative, but also dedication to effectively communicating with patients you want to help serve in the future. Also think about which of the PA specialties you might want to work in and what experiences you have which can contribute to this specialty.

When it comes to sitting down and writing your PA personal statement, it's important to note that the most successful statements are those that tell a story. Not unlike a medical school personal statement , your PA personal statement is not a recitation of your CV. Listing accomplishments, awards, and your education will not interest the admissions committee. That information is already available in your medical school resume and elsewhere in your application; the personal statement is a piece of art, not a dry informational document. It should allow members of the admissions committee to gain insight into your personal story and take them on your journey to becoming a PA.

Stories are excellent for a few different reasons. First, stories are interesting. As humans, we tend to be drawn to stories, we love books, movies, articles - anything that allows us to be transported to another time, another place, another experience. If the story is well written, it moves us by eliciting an emotional response from us. Whether that is happiness, sadness, compassion, love, desire, or amusement, stories have the power to affect us and that's exactly what you want the admissions committees to experience: emotion. Emotional content is powerful content, and it leaves an impact. It's memorable, it stays with you, and it stands out.

In addition to being captivating, writing your personal statement in the form of a story is also beneficial because it helps tell your story in a chronological manner. The last thing you want, other than a boring personal statement, is one that doesn’t make sense and leaves admissions committee members confused. Jumping from one point in time to the next, from one experience to the next without order will only create a disjointed, unstructured essay. Instead, tell your story chronologically, beginning with an introduction to your interest or exposure to medicine, flowing into a few significant experiences throughout your life, and ending with a powerful conclusion that ties the entire essay together.

#4 Be Original.

You are not like anyone else; despite what you might think, you're an original personal with individual thoughts, experiences, and interests. Don't get sucked into using clichés, common quotes, and unoriginal statements. It's not about writing what you think the admissions committee wants to hear such as “I want to be a doctor because I want to help people” or “I've always dreamed of becoming a doctor”.

Let your personal statement highlight what makes you unique as an applicant, how your personal qualities complement the profession, and what skills and key competencies you can bring to the entering class. Overall, it's important to consider what experiences and skills distinguish you from other applicants. Admissions committees will be reviewing hundreds if not thousands of PA school personal statements; what is going to make your statement stand out? What do you have to offer? How can you contribute to the profession?

What makes a strong PA personal statement?

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Why show, don’t tell is the #1 rule to follow for personal statements:

Common PA Personal Statement Mistakes to Avoid

#1 reciting your cv..

Admissions committees already have this information so this isn't suitable for your personal statement. Focus on quality of experiences. When brainstorming, write down the most significant experiences, either professional or personal, which led to you pursuing a career as a PA.

#2 Casting yourself as the victim.

Many people have experienced difficult situations, such as emigrating from another country or suffering an injury. This can be powerful to discuss in your PA personal statement, but only if you can show resilience and ensure you're not playing the victim. As a general rule of thumb, be sure to only include an experience if you can discuss how it shapes you as a person, how it helped you grow, and will help you become a better future physician assistant.

#3 Telling instead of showing.

It's not enough to say statements such as “I am a good listener” or “My experience shadowing has made me compassionate”. You need to show, or demonstrate, how you are a good listener, and how shadowing has helped you become compassionate. Discuss how interacting with patients helped you develop compassion or how your listening skills helped a specific patient with their problem. Discuss real experiences that can support and provide evidence for any statements.

The opening sentence in your PA school personal statement is the hook for your entire essay. If it's not enticing, unique, and memorable, you risk your essay blending in with the thousands of other admissions essays and ending up at the bottom of the pile. Your opening sentence and paragraph need to be engaging, you want to create a sense of desire so that admission committee members won't want to put down your statement, they should want to continue reading to find out the rest of your story. Remember that admissions committees tend to read these essays quickly, so if you don’t grab their attention right away, your essay will be quickly forgotten. PA school personal statement editing can be a big help in rewriting or tweaking your essay so it is polished and engaging. It’s always a good idea to get another set of eyes on your essay, too, to make sure there are no mistakes or get objective feedback. For students who want professional feedback on their work, expert physician assistant application help can be a great resource to use.

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#5 Failing to have a strong conclusion.

Just like a strong introduction, a good conclusion bookends a strong PA personal statement. A strong concluding paragraph not only sums up the main points of your previous paragraphs, but it should end on an engaging note. You want to leave the admissions committee wanting to know more about you, as this makes them more likely to call you for an interview. Your conclusion should be more than just “this is why I’ll make a good PA”, or “and that is why the PA profession is for me.” Your conclusion should bring back your main points, but an excellent closing statement can call back to your engaging opening sentence while also inviting the reader to continue the conversation.

#6 Relying on clichés.

The purpose of your PA personal statement is to stand out, not blend in. So don't use clichés and popular quotes that are tired and dry. Be original and use your own thoughts instead of the thoughts of others. It can be easy to fall into the habit of using common phrases or cliched language, but revising your draft can help you pick these out and rewrite them.

#7 Failing to reflect.

Any experience you describe in your PA personal statement should be followed by thoughtful reflection. You can't simply state that you worked as a research assistant in a lab and contributed to a publication. Think about why you want to discuss an experience in the first place and always be answering, why was it significant? What did you learn from it? How will it help you in your career as a physician assistant? How did this experience encourage me to become a PA? Your personal statement should demonstrate a deeper understanding of yourself and your goals, so self-reflection and self-insight is key here. While you’re brainstorming ideas for your personal statement, take some time to ask yourself these questions.

#8 Grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.

Your PA personal statement should be free from all errors and mistakes. Keep in mind that your personal statement is a direct reflection of who you are as a person. Mistakes indicate that you rushed your statement, are not detail-oriented and that you're not really invested in your potential career. An excellent PA personal statement has been through many revisions and has had multiple reviewers. It's a good idea to seek professional help such as a medical school advisor not only to ensure your statement is free from errors but so that you can receive personalized feedback on your statement to ensure you are putting your best self forward.

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I have one person to thank for inspiring me to become a physician assistant: my great-grandmother Lucia. She was the catalyst behind me entering health care, and she is also the reason I’ve decided to change my career and apply to PA school and start a new direction in my professional life. My great-grandmother was never the sort to be content with simply standing still or not taking chances, and from a young age she encouraged me to chase my passion and pursue work that fulfills me. Having reached a point in my professional life that I need to take a chance, I recalled my great-grandmother’s sage advice.

As a child, my family and I visited my great-grandmother at her nursing home whenever possible. Although the drive was long, it was worth it to spend a few hours in her company. She was a funny, bright and charming woman, and to a child, her stories of growing up on a homestead in the early 20 th century were fascinating and eye-opening. She never seemed to be afraid of anything, whether it be moving across the country, welcoming another child or standing up for herself. Spending time with my great-grandmother and her neighbors gave me an appreciation for seniors and the stories they could tell me. Now, I remember pieces of stories from people who came from all diverse backgrounds and circumstances: a retired police officer from St. Louis, a former nanny who spoke 4 languages, a classical musician who once played in Carnegie Hall. My experiences with my great-grandmother and her neighbors stayed with me as I grew up, and after graduating I decided to become a CNA. I worked in several nursing homes and eventually, I began working as a hospice care worker.

Working in hospice was a fulfilling experience for me because I was able to spend longer periods of time with patients and once again get to hear their stories and all about their lives. I met many incredible people, including a Vietnam war veteran, a former jazz singer, and a housewife who raised 8 children, had never learned to drive but tried skydiving for the first time when she was in her 60s. Hospice care allowed me to form stronger bonds of friendship with the seniors in my care, and it reignited the spark I’d felt when visiting my great-grandmother, who at that point had passed on. In my work I found the passion that Lucia told me to look for and also the fulfillment of knowing that I was providing meaningful physical, mental and emotional care to my patients.

As personally fulfilling as my position was, I knew that it would not be a position I could stay in forever. Hospice care is a professionally demanding job, and it can be emotionally and mentally challenging. When I reached a point of having itchy feet, as Lucia put it, I knew it was time to think about next steps. I briefly returned to working in a local hospital as a CNA and shadowed two nurses and a PA to get a better idea of the kind of work I could transition to. After examining my shadowing experiences, my work history, and listening to Lucia’s voice in the back of my head, I knew that applying to PA school was the next step. Being a PA would let me keep working closely with the patients I loved working with, but allow me flexibility and variety—a breath of fresh air and a welcome change.

I know my great-grandmother Lucia would approve of my choice of work and my care of others, and that she would smile at seeing me stop thinking and do something to change my life when I’m not satisfied. Most of all, I thank her for instilling in me a sense of care and helping me be attuned to myself, so I can confidently start this new path in my life. (656 words)

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PA Personal Statement Example #5

I started caring for my first patient when I was 8 years old. My younger sister, Amelia, was only 3, and because of her chronic health conditions, including asthma and various allergies, our mother frequently brought her into the health clinic for check-ups, blood draws and chest scans. Since I was too young to be left alone, I was part of the after-school doctor’s visit routine. My sister, who like many children dreaded the phlebotomist coming at her with a needle, hated these visits. To help her feel better and manage her fears, I took on the role of sisterly caregiver. I held her hand during every blood draw, talked her through every scan and did my best to distract her from anything new and scary. Seeing how my efforts calmed her and made the doctor’s visits less anxiety-inducing, I committed to being her “doctor-buddy” and going with her for any health-related appointments.

After dozens of appoints, both for my sister, myself and other siblings, I began to recognize our regular nurses and medical assistants by name. They were always kind to me and my siblings, offering comforting words and lollipops. I began to anticipate seeing the various nurses, phlebotomists and scribes, talking their ears off about school or soccer practice. The doctors we met rotated with every visit, and our time with them was always short, as they had many other patients to see at the busy clinic.

Thinking that being a nurse was more fulfilling than being a doctor, and having acted as my sister’s carer, I decided in high school that nursing school would be my goal. I worked hard at school, taking the necessary courses and taking a volunteer position with a mobile health clinic that served hard-to-reach areas in our community. All too soon, I found the work dissatisfying. Because we were a mobile clinic, we were always on the move to the next patient. I couldn’t take my time with each patient and form a bond, as I had with my sister and her nurses. I didn’t feel I was getting the experience or developing the level of patient care I aspired to. I switched to working in a nearby rural St. Joseph hospital as a medical assistant, and there I found the work experience I was craving. I enjoyed working with underserved patients in the rural areas, but I wanted to spend more time with patients instead of paperwork, and I liked having a home base to stay at.

It was here that I met Carmen, one of a handful of physician assistants in the area. She was a constant presence a St. Joseph’s, and since everyone knew everyone, everybody knew Carmen. She had a warm personality and a well-known sharp wit, so she was a great teammate to work with no matter your position in the hospital. When it came to patients, she knew everyone. When a long-term care patient had a birthday, Carmen was organizing the celebration with other residents. When a child came in for a check-up, Carmen was right there asking them about school and family. Carmen exemplified the kind of personalized patient care I aspired to and knew that patients like my sister and I appreciated so much.

Carmen became a mentor to me, and I asked her about her journey to becoming a PA. Since Carmen knew my plan was to become a nurse, she told me “we have many excellent nurses her, but we need more excellent PAs to fill the gaps between nurses and doctors—there are too many patients and too many health workers spread thin. PAs can be the bridge that our patients need.”

Carmen’s words stuck with me and realizing that she was right inspired me to reroute my intended path into healthcare. There is a need for diverse healthcare workers of every discipline, and PAs are underrepresented compared to nurses and doctors. As a PA, I know I have a better chance of increased patient interaction and entering the kind of workplace environment I enjoy. I believe as a PA I’ll be able to excel in work and bring my passion for patient-centred care to my job every day. (698 words)

Synergy has always been important to me. I’ve always liked balance and seeing projects through to completion. The sense of fulfillment of a job well done is a satisfying cap for any task. Teamwork and collaboration are important values for me in both personal and professional environments. These values were never more apparent to me than when I played college volleyball.

I’m a fairly independent person, but competing on my college’s volleyball team allowed me to appreciate the synergy of a team sport. As someone who abhorred the lack of synergy and teamwork in most academic group projects, competing with my teammates was a great balance between relying on my own independent skills and knowing I could count on the efforts and skills of other players. Alone, I knew I could score a point, but as team, we could win a tournament. In fact, our volleyball team won nationals two years in a row, and we completed the Wild Rose Collegiate Volleyball Tournament undefeated. I found that seeing my teammates work so hard made me strive to work just as hard. To push myself and become a better player so I could be a better teammate in turn.

Just as my volleyball team was able to work in sync to achieve our high-level goals, the medical team was a perfect example of teamwork and collaboration. They cared for the team’s players throughout our seasons, monitoring their health or jumping in to tend injuries or handle crises whenever needed. All parts of our team worked together to help each other excel, and the resulting synergy meant we could achieve remarkable things.

Since I excelled in school and was always drawn to the science of sports, I started exploring a career in sports health. I talked often to the volleyball medical team, curious about the ins and outs of a career in sports medicine and what the possibilities were. I also knew sports medicine would provide that special blend of teamwork and independent work, of science and health I was seeking.

Knowing of my interest in the field, my brother offered to introduce me to his college hockey team’s medical officer. A physician assistant by trade, Adam had been working with the team for several years, and like me, he shared an interest in sports and medicine. I asked to shadow Adam for a season, and he agreed. Whenever a player was injured, I assisted Adam in treating it. When Adam conducted regular check-ins, I served as his assistant, getting to know the players on the team and collaborating with Adam on treatment plans. Especially rewarding for me was creating a physiotherapy treatment plan with Adam for Blake, a player who tore his ACL. Where insurance fell short of covering his sessions with a licensed physiotherapist, Adam and I created a personalized plan for at-home treatment, and we followed up with Blake every week during practices to check on his progress. Seeing Blake through his recovery and back onto the ice was immensely satisfying, and the collaborative energy of Adam and I working together and problem-solving was an incredibly rewarding experience.

Adam was my guide to the PA profession, and offered me invaluable insights into what the work is like, especially getting into a niche specialty like sports medicine. He helped solidify my position to apply to your school, and he has graciously written me a recommendation letter for my application.

I have never been satisfied with one thing or the other, always looking for that perfect combination. That perfect niche. I think becoming a PA is the right foundation for my ultimate goal of specializing in sports medicine, and it will embody that synergy of multiple disciplines coming together to create something altogether better. (623 words)

PA Personal Statement Example #7

In 2009, I was one of the only women in the world to perform a triple twisting lay out on the floor exercise in gymnastics. The skill was rare because of the combination of proprioception and technique required. Even the most minute error could spell disaster, which is exactly what happened during a NCAA competition. I executed the skill at an extreme angle, rupturing my Achilles tendon as I launched into the air. Feeling lucky to have landed on my feet, I collapsed to the floor after a few clumsy steps. The athletic trainer immediately assessed my injury calmly and purposefully, which left a lasting impression. Not only did she take care of me in that moment, she continued to support me through my surgery, 8 months of physical therapy, and a successful comeback to the sport. As a college student, I was uncertain of my future career, but this moment inspired me to make it my mission to be equipped with the skills to be of use in a moment of need, and support others in recovery and success. However, it would take ten years, a teaching career, a job lay-off and an insightful conversation to find my way to physician assistant (PA) school.

Before embarking on my journey to become a PA, I earned my Bachelor’s degree in communications, and I went on to work in Madrid, Spain, where I taught English and learned Spanish for 3 years. I strived to tailor my instruction to the unique needs of each student; a skill that has prepared me to provide individualized care to meet patient’s needs. One of my students wanted to become more marketable to jobs. I curated lessons to build grammar and vocabulary while incorporating resources he was interested in such as sports podcasts. I helped him practice interviews and draft emails until he landed his dream job at a multinational company. This instilled my confidence in supporting the success of my students and it felt rewarding to pave a way for more opportunities in their lives.

My next opportunity would prove less rewarding but pivotal. When I returned to the United States, I landed a job at a marketing firm that would fold and lay off its entire staff two years later. This ultimately led to a conversation with my friend, a urologist, which opened my eyes to many unmet medical needs and the growing demand for PAs. I saw my use through the combination of my ability as a teacher to help others succeed and my experience recovering from my gymnastics injury to be an integral source of support and care. I felt the pieces of my mission fit together and embarked on my journey to become a PA.

I took action to get health care experience as a medical assistant (MA) and physical therapy (PT) aide. Working as a MA at memory care facilities, I have gained insight into patient interaction and built my compassion by spending time with each patient to explain procedures in a slow and concise manner to gain their trust. As a PT aide, I collaborate with the physical therapist but independently administer treatment to diverse patients with a patient-centered approach. On one occasion, I supported two patients recovering from a hip replacement. I intended to give them both the same exercises for treatment, but I learned that Patient A had neuropathy in his feet, making standing exercises unsuitable due to his inability to balance. I modified exercises to be done seated and provided balance support when necessary. Additionally, Patient B’s religious values precluded her from accepting therapy in the communal treatment area, so I set up a private space for her. Accommodating these specific medical needs and sociocultural values helped me understand the importance of providing individualized care that is attuned to patient’s unique circumstances. Though these roles have been formative, I feel a nagging sense of futility when patients come to me for additional medical treatment beyond my scope, which fuels my ambition toward becoming a PA. I aim to have the medical knowledge to comprehensively treat with a balance of autonomy and collaboration.

I observed this balance when shadowing Sallie C., an otolaryngology PA. She assessed a patient with a foreign body in his ear, planned a procedure for removal but proved to be unexpectedly complex. She collaborated with the physician and the case was resolved with surgery. Through this, I also saw how PAs fill gaps in the healthcare system by treating, diagnosing, and prescribing medication, thus increasing the number of patients that are treated every day with quality care.

I aspire to fill these gaps and provide quality care and support to patients in moments of need, much like my athletic trainer did for me. If compassion, collaboration, and versatility make a successful PA, then the combination of my experiences has uniquely prepared me to succeed.

At the core of my teaching and health care experiences is my desire to become a PA to grow my medical skills to serve diverse individuals and ensure their health needs are met over the next ten years and beyond.

When I was sixteen, I was diagnosed with a fibroadenoma in my left breast. Although the mass was benign, I was concerned about potential complications of breast cancer and made the decision to have it surgically removed. After I recovered from the anesthesia, my surgeon pulled up a chair beside me and gave me his undivided attention. He reassured me that the surgery was a success and that my recovery would be uneventful. His compassion and unwavering support during this difficult time inspired me to pursue a career in medicine. Today, I strive to become a physician assistant (PA) so I can embody the same level of empathy and care with my future patients. 

During my internal medicine rotation at Richmond Medical Center (RUMC) in 2010, I acquired the skills necessary to succeed in the medical field. There, I was responsible for taking histories, conducting physical exams, creating patient management plans, completing morbidity and mortality rounds, and attending lectures with the residents. During rounds, I introduced patients to the attending doctor and discussed plans of care. I also helped interns by following labs, imaging studies, and reporting any concerns or complaints. I learned good bedside manners and how to effectively communicate with patients and their families. Not only did I understand how to establish rapport with patients, but I also learned how to respond to criticism constructively and confirm suspected diagnoses. I also understood how to apply my medical knowledge to manage and treat conditions such as asthma, COPD, and urinary tract infections. As a PA, I will continuously build on my expertise to improve the care of my patients. 

A PA is more impactful than people realize. At RUMC, I was inspired by one PA in particular. Intrigued by her competency, I often inquired with her about the profession. Her continuous emphasis on the patient-centered approach is what initially drew me to the field. My interest in becoming a PA solidified when I was able to put this approach into practice. During one of my rotations, a 90-year-old Alzheimer’s patient was admitted to the unit with a urinary tract infection. Quickly, she became restless, irritable, and confused, and she tried to pull out the IV. Since the attending physician was unavailable, I proceeded to care for the patient. While holding her hand, I reassured her that we were there to help, and I explained that she needed the IV medication to get better. Soon after, she calmed down and we were able to continue the treatment. At that moment, I understood why I wanted to be a PA. From my personal experience I know very well that being sick can make one feel vulnerable and scared. I also know that having empathetic medical professionals can make a big difference in the patient experience and the outcome of care. I aspire to be a PA not only to be skillful and competent in my profession but also to be fully present for my patients and to extend a compassionate hand to them when they are at a low point in their lives. 

Since the COVID-19 pandemic, I have been volunteering in a free clinic where I extend empathy and care to the underserved community. Last year, I attended to a homeless patient named James. He complained that his eyes and skin were yellowing and that he was bruising easily. When I took James’s history, he disclosed that he had been diagnosed with alcohol use disorder and was unsuccessful in AA. Based on his history and physical exam, I suspected alcoholic liver disease, so I ordered various clinical tests to confirm the diagnosis. The next day before we could discuss his test results, I found him lying near the front door of the clinic, unconscious. I called 911 and performed CPR until he was taken to the hospital where he was treated for an upper GI bleed. Two months later, James passed away from severe recurrence. Through this experience, I recognized the importance of conducting thorough patient screenings and extensive clinical tests to facilitate a prompt diagnosis and an early treatment plan. While it was already too late to save James, as a PA I will ensure that patients in my care receive timely preventive care to reduce the risk of future health complications.

Throughout my life, I have learned that I am strong and competent enough to relate to other people’s suffering without falling apart, and that I have a good work ethic with the intrinsic motivation necessary to get the job done. When I get admitted to the Miami Dade College Physician Assistant Program, I will contribute my life experiences, my determination to overcome obstacles, my desire to work in teams, and my enthusiasm to learn. Five years from now, I see myself working as a competent physician assistant, providing healthcare services to medically underserved residents in urban and rural communities. This time, I will be the one who pulls up the chair and provides my patients with undivided attention. I will be their reliable source of compassion and support. 

Your personal statement will be structured as a short essay, with an introduction, body paragraphs and a conclusion. Your opening paragraph should serve as a short introduction of yourself and why you want to become a PA. The body paragraphs will outline specific examples or experiences you have which contributed to your journey to become a PA, and the conclusion will sum up your statement while inviting the reader to continue the conversation.

To write a good personal statement for PA school, you’ll need an intriguing and engaging introduction, 1-3 significant experiences or examples of how you are suited for the PA profession or why you want to become a PA, and a strong conclusion which invites admissions committees to learn more about you.

Your PA school personal statement should be between 500 and 750 words. The typical limit for personal statements if 5,000 characters, with spaces included.

PA school admissions committees are interested in your personal statement because they want to know more about your background, personal qualities and why you want to become a PA. It should include significant personal and professional experiences you have which led you to the profession and contributed to your desire to become a PA. Admissions committees expect to see some self-reflection and insight into your goals and motivations. They also want to see that you have the skills and qualities of a good physician assistant.

The best way to stand out in a PA personal statement is to have both strong writing and a strong story. Admission committees will read thousands of personal statements outlining many different stories, but you can stand out by providing interesting details and weaving an engaging story. The details of a personal story will be remembered more clearly by your reader than generic statements about your experience shadowing a PA, so remember to personalize your essay and make it unique!

In a PA statement, avoid reciting your resume or relying on cliches. It’s also important not to have any grammar or spelling mistakes. Most importantly, don’t talk about pursuing a career as a PA due to a failed medical school application or because you view it as a “back-up” option. You should have a strong reason for applying to PA school specifically, not because it is “easier” than medical school or related professions.

Yes. You should write out “physician assistant” in the first instance, but you can include the “PA” abbreviation in follow-up instances. 

Your opening statement needs to “hook” your reader or engage them right off the bat. A good way to start is with a personal story or statement that sums up the key theme of your essay. 

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A traditional autobiography may be hundreds of pages and can cover dozens of mundane interactions in minute detail. A graduate school autobiographical essay, however, should be much shorter and to the point, highlighting achievements and life events that are relevant to your studies or display an important aspect of your character. Before you begin writing, make an outline of the most important points you want to cover. This can make it much easier to tell a clear, logical story that gets you into the school of your dreams.

Grabbing Their Attention

You need to grab the attention of your readers in the first sentence or two, so steer clear of platitudes, truisms or statements any student could make such as, "XYZ school is the school of my dreams." Instead, try telling a compelling story, introducing an interesting quote or presenting the ideas of a philosopher, writer or politician. The theme in this hook should tie into your essay in some way. If, for example, you're applying to grad school in political science, you might introduce a quote from Thomas Jefferson or present a scene rife with political conflict.

The Thesis Statement

Because you're not writing an argumentative paper, it's easy to forget the importance of a thesis statement. But a thesis still helps define the scope of your autobiographical essay and makes it easier for you to remain focused on your primary point. Try a thesis such as, "My life experiences have prepared me for graduate school by...." or "I know that I can contribute to the XYZ school community because..." Sometimes the thesis in these essays actually fits better at the end, as a conclusion, but it's typically easiest to put the thesis at the end of the first paragraph.

Elements to Include

Outline relevant information that's not already in your application packet. You might mention charitable work, any hardships you've overcome, lessons you've learned in your job or ways your life has caused you to choose a particular career path. Don't be afraid to let your personality shine through by, for example, mentioning your passion for good food or animal welfare, but don't stray away from your central topic, and avoid using colloquial language or slang. It's also important not to add unnecessary detail that clouds the focus of your essay or needlessly takes up space.

Elements to Avoid

Avoid controversial topics, even if they're an important part of your identity. A struggle with addiction or an abortion aren't generally appropriate topics, and an essay outlining the struggles you've faced in life is rarely appropriate unless you can tie it directly to your academic achievements or goals. For example, a domestic violence victim might explain that she wants to get a degree in psychology so she can help other trauma survivors. Never avoid blame or responsibility; for example, don't blame a low grade on a professor or on your classmates.

Completing the Essay

Meticulous proofreading can save you the embarrassment of a typo or misspelling, so read through your essay several times and have another person do the same. Conclude your essay by thanking your readers for their attention, emphasizing the ways in which the ideas you've outlined make you an ideal fit for the school you've chosen and -- if appropriate and if space permits -- including a brief sentence or two about why you're excited to attend the school you've chosen.

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Pa school personal statement: complete guide + examples.

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Reviewed: 11/6/23

If you’re applying to a Physician’s Assistant program, you will be asked to write a personal statement. Continue reading as we outline the dos and don'ts of your PA school personal statement. 

Are you wondering how to write a unique, stand-out personal statement for PA school? We’ve got you covered with our complete guide to writing a stellar personal statement. 

This one document has the power to set you apart from the competition, giving admissions committees a deeper understanding of who you are beyond your academic achievements and test scores. 

In this guide, we'll walk you through the dos and don'ts of crafting a compelling personal statement that will leave a lasting impression. 

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How To Write a Strong PA School Personal Statement

The first step is understanding what a personal statement is. A personal statement is a piece of writing that shares who you are to admissions committees. Many programs like humanities and social sciences ask applicants to write personal statements to learn about the applicant on a more intimate level. 

Unlike a statement of purpose, a personal statement focuses more on you and your interests and hobbies rather than academic achievements and accomplishments. 

A personal statement is usually less formal and may take a storytelling approach as you share how your experiences have shaped you and led you to apply to the specific program. 

While the tone is less formal than a statement of purpose, make sure your personal statement is well-written and engaging to your reader. You should proofread and edit your writing multiple times before submitting it. 

When writing a personal statement, think about answering some of the following questions: 

• Why did you pick this program?
• What experiences do you have that makes you a good candidate for the Program?
• What can you bring to the program?
• What can the program bring to you?
• What achievements are you proud of?
• What setbacks or challenges have you overcome?
• What are your career goals, and how does this program help you achieve them? 

As most personal statements are about 500 to 600 words, or two pages double-spaced, you won’t have the space to answer all of these questions. Pick a few to focus on. 

Now that we have a pretty good understanding of the expectations and tone of a personal statement let's discuss how to write a strong personal statement for PA school. 

The first thing to do before you begin writing is to read the school’s instructions carefully. Different schools may ask you to include specific pieces of information in your statement. The key to impressing the admissions committee is to demonstrate that you are detail-oriented and have actually read through the instructions. 

Admission committees for PA schools want to know if you are right for the field before admitting you into the program. If they think you won’t make a good PA, then they most likely won’t accept your application. 

Your personal statement for a PA school should demonstrate why you want to be a Physician Assistant and why you would make a good PA. When writing your statement, highlight specific attributes and characteristics that make up a good PA. Some specific traits to highlight may include:

• Attention to Detail 
• Compassion 
• Confidence 
• Problem-Solver
• Emotional Intelligence 
• Commitment 
• Professionalism  

All of these traits make up a successful Physician Assistant . Use specific examples from your personal experience to show off your great traits. As the saying goes, show, don’t tell. Pick a couple of examples that demonstrate you possess one or more of these traits for your personal statement. 

Successful PA essays are not about job experience; in fact, you should think of a well-rounded approach to medicine. For example, think of extracurricular activities that have shaped your interest in medicine and helped you grow as a person. 

Make sure to work on your personal statement well in advance of submitting your application. This will help ensure you have ample time for revisions, meet the application deadlines and can present the best possible version of yourself to the admissions committee.

What To Avoid In Your Personal Statement for PA School

There are a lot of tips on how to write a good personal statement for med school that you can use for a PA personal statement. However, it is important to know what to avoid doing as well. 

Don’t be dishonest and disingenuous in your personal statement. Admissions committees read thousands of personal statements and can spot those who feel off or insincere. 

You don’t have to be a perfect person or perfect applicant to get accepted; be yourself and be honest. In fact, acknowledging challenges or setbacks that you have faced and overcame is a great way to demonstrate your resilience and problem-solving skills that make you a stronger candidate! 

Also, avoid generic clichés and overused quotations in personal statements. This can include statements such as “I want to be a PA because I love helping people.” General statements such as this are overdone and come across as dull and impersonal. 

Also, steer clear of fixating on salary details. Focusing too much on the money aspect might make it seem like your main motivation for becoming a Physician's Assistant is financial gain, rather than a true passion for patient care and healthcare. Instead, let your personal statement shines with your real-life experiences and genuine enthusiasm for this profession.

Instead, try some suggestions for engaging ways to start your PA personal statement from Hamilton University: 

• Standard: Simply state what you will be talking about in your paper, basically like a thesis statement. 
• Creative: Find a creative and unique way to begin your personal statement. For example, you can start your piece with a relevant quotation that speaks to you and relates to your experiences. 
• Action: Begin in the middle of a story to draw your reader right into the action. 
• Personal: Start off your statement by revealing something personal about yourself that has led you to your interest in medicine. 
• Informative: State a fact that leads into your personal experiences. 

Avoid academic jargon or overly complicated language in your personal statement as well. Keep it simple and easy to read. Being over-dramatic can be off-putting and impersonal. Your personal statement should reflect who you are, so be authentic and genuine. 

It can be difficult to write something intimate about yourself for strangers to read. It can also be hard to balance between humility and boasting. If you need some extra help, you may find some tips on how to write a recommendation letter for yourself helpful. 

While a personal statement is not the same as a letter of recommendation, there are some core similarities. 

PA School Personal Statement Example

Now that we have discussed the components of a personal statement for PA school, let’s check out some essays that were accepted for PA programs to give you an idea of what a good personal statement looks like. 

Here is an example of a well-written personal statement: 

“Hey Doc, you might want to have a look at this.” On my computer rested a radiology report for a patient I saw with my rural preceptor. She came to the office with left upper quadrant pain, early satiety, and abdominal distention. Due to the patient’s age and family history, I was worried that her vague symptoms could be related to ovarian malignancy; thus, I enquired to my preceptor if he thought ultrasonographic imaging would be appropriate. He readily agreed with my rationale. This report reflected my gut feeling that something was wrong: “There are multiple solid masses in the liver…dominant mass measures 17.0 x 12.9 x 18.1 cm. Follow-up CT recommended.” Although it may sound strange, reading those words convinced me I wanted to become a radiologist. 

I wanted to be the person to give an answer for that patient. I wished I could have performed the patient’s ultrasound examination and subsequently analyzed the findings. One of my family medicine patients suffered mortal complications from the rupture of a massive basilar artery aneurysm, and I used his tragic CTA findings to give insights on how to understand the Circle of Willis and how its anatomy explained the patient’s unfortunate condition. 

I had done research one summer centered around using microbubble contrast-enhanced ultrasound to characterize indeterminate renal lesions. I began the project as someone who was incapable of understanding what those series of words actually meant, but by the end I was trying to explain the various septations and wall patterns of lesions suggestive of malignancy to my exasperated, but thankfully supportive, parents. It is this constant teaching aspect of radiology that attracts me to the field. The most obvious instruction one gives as a radiologist is assisting physicians with disease diagnosis and pathology localization, but I see a burgeoning, ever-questioning group of pupils waiting ahead for radiologists: their patients. 

As society becomes increasingly tech-savvy, there will be an increasing desire from patients to access their medical images digitally. With that, there comes the concurrent expectation that radiologists will have to be responsible in disseminating this information, as well as explaining the abnormalities. As this latter role has traditionally been in the hands of primary care physicians and/or specialists, radiology will have to adapt and rise to this challenge. 

I am looking for a residency program that wants to prepare its students for this inevitable future. Such a program would obviously need to be strong in giving its future radiologists extensive breadth and depth in commonplace and emerging image modalities with distinguished skills in fostering student independence. As part of that independence, the program must have a strong emphasis on how best to explain radiologic findings for both physicians and laypeople. Additionally, I hope for ample opportunities for resident research, as well as strong mentorship from both upper level residents and faculty.”

Why this personal statement works : The student clearly outlines their goals and how these goals relate to the PA program. The student also clearly demonstrates how their background and personal experiences support their career goals which shows the reader that they are capable of being a great candidate for a PA program.  

Here is another excerpt from a statement that shares a personal story: 

“Do you think we can take in a 2-year-old?” Unsure if my wife was joking, I stopped midway up the steep hill on 19th Street in Birmingham to catch my breath, which was now short for reasons other than the strenuous walk. My wife went on, explaining that her niece, Gabby, needed a home. Nobody else in the family was able to help, and if we didn’t, she would likely end up in foster care. Though we later discussed it at great length, my mind was made up before I submitted the hill. My parents, who worked at a children’s home in Alabama for most of my life, showed me the impact a loving home could have on a child’s life. I couldn’t imagine saying no to this little girl. Less than a month later, we received full custody of Gabby and it became the three of us (plus the cat). It was my first year of medical school, my wife worked full-time, and we were the sole caretakers of a toddler. Through all the stresses of those early times, one thing stands out in my mind as perhaps the most stressful of all—her nighttime cough. That cough kept us awake at night. Each time Gabby let out a string of coughs, I crawled down to the edge of the bed and put my hand on her chest to make sure she was still breathing. We had been told that she might have asthma, but that was all we knew. We didn’t have any of the documentation most places required for care. We had no Medicaid information, Social Security number, birth certificate, or medical history—only a piece of paper signed by a judge that said we were responsible for her. My wife and I were at a loss—how could we care for this child if we could not get her most basic healthcare needs met? Thankfully, we stumbled upon Christ Health Center, a Federally Qualified Health center (FQHC) in Birmingham. 

Christ Health Center was exactly what our family needed. In addition to caring for Gabby’s needs when most other places would not, I saw there a model of the sort of clinical work I intend on doing after residency. I was so impressed I signed up to do an elective rotation with them between first and second year. Prior to that, I was fairly certain I wanted to practice family medicine and work with the underserved in some way; after my first day at Christ Health Center, there was no doubt left in my mind. My draw to family medicine in general, and FQHCs in particular, is the potential for community change. At Christ Health Center, patients often came in with their entire families and everyone in the room had an issue to address, medical or otherwise. I learned some of the nuances of working with a community and gained skills necessary to help meet these needs. Usually, it was just a word of reassurance; other times, it was patient and family education; and occasionally, it was setting them up with resources for food and housing. 

The lessons of those few months are often in my mind as I see patients. During my family medicine clerkship, I was tasked with doing the H&P for three different children in the same room. Inside, I found a frazzled mother completing paperwork while the kids scrambled about the room. She tried her best to calm them as I started on the histories, but to little avail. She grew more and more dispirited as she continued answering, “I don’t know.” Finally, on the verge of tears, she said, “I’m so sorry. I just got custody of all three of them and don’t know anything about their histories.” I paused, remembering Gabby’s nighttime cough. Finally, I said, “Don’t worry, we’ll take care of them. I know exactly how you feel.” 

Why this personal statement works : This student takes a slightly different route than the first example but is also an effective way to write a captivating personal statement. 

This statement reads more like a story, and the reader gets to know the student on a closer level. 

By creating this sense of intimacy, the student demonstrates that their empathy and their ability to overcome personal challenges makes them a great candidate for a PA program. 

Both examples are strong, so the route you want to take is up to you.

Still have some questions? Keep reading as we answer some of your frequently asked questions. 

1. What Should Be In A Personal Statement for PA School?

You should highlight some of your traits and experiences that make you the right fit for the program and the field. Make it personal and make it about you, but remember to also be genuine and humble. 

A personal statement is your opportunity to introduce yourself to the admissions committee. Think about how you want to present yourself and what you want the admissions committee to know about you. 

2. How Do You Write A Unique Personal Statement for PA School?

The most important piece to writing a unique personal statement for PA school is to be yourself and write from your heart. 

3. How Long Should a PA School Personal Statement Be?

This all depends on the school and their instructions. However, most personal statements range from 500 words to 1,000 words. Unless stated otherwise, they should never be longer than 1,000 words. 

Final Thoughts

A personal statement is a key piece of your application. Like your interview , it’s your chance to introduce yourself to the admissions committee and really stand out amongst other applicants. A PA school personal statement is also a great opportunity to show off your writing and communication skills. 

Remember to read through the instructions posted by the school, keep it personal and honest, and proofread and edit before submitting. Follow these key steps to write a personal statement that will impress admissions committees.

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Table of contents

• 1 What Is an Autobiography?
• 2.1 Traditional Autobiography
• 2.3 Intellectual Autobiography
• 2.4 Spiritual Autobiography
• 2.5 Confessional Autobiography
• 2.6 Therapeutic Autobiography
• 2.7 Fictionalized Autobiography
• 3.1 What Structuring Approach to Choose?
• 3.2 Thematic Order
• 3.3 Reverse Chronological Order
• 3.4 Flashback or Non-Linear Narrative
• 3.5 Circular Narrative
• 3.6 Epistolary Format
• 4 How to Structure an Autobiography Essay?
• 5 How to Title an Autobiography Essay?
• 6.1 Identifying Key Life Events
• 6.2 Theme and Narrative Arc
• 6.3 Balancing Facts and Reflections
• 6.4 Enhancing Your Essay with Dialogues
• 6.5 Connecting to the Reader
• 6.6 Honesty and Vulnerability
• 7 Examples of Autobiography
• 8 Bottom Line

When you start writing an autobiography essay, it simultaneously opens doors to your past, present, and future. Indeed, it’s an opportunity to delve into your experiences, emotions, and reflections, weaving them into a compelling narrative that resonates with readers. Whether you’re a seasoned writer or new to personal storytelling, the task may seem daunting. However, composing your life’s narrative can be enriching and fulfilling with the right approach.

In this article, you will find answers:

• What types of autobiography essays exist;
• How to write an autobiography;
• What is the basic essay about yourself.

Let’s embark on this transformative journey together, unlocking the art of autobiographical storytelling.

What Is an Autobiography?

• Definition and purpose: An autobiography essay is a narrative account of one’s life, exploring significant events, experiences, and reflections. Its purpose varies from personal self-reflection to academic assignments, memoir writing, or sharing insights with a broader audience. Thus, storytelling aims to convey a deeper understanding of oneself and the journey traversed.
• Audience Consideration: Knowing your audience is paramount to crafting an effective autobiographical essay. Consider whether you’re writing for academic evaluation, personal introspection, or professional sharing. Besides, tailoring your narrative to suit your audience’s expectations, interests, and background enhances engagement and ensures your message resonates effectively.
• Tone and Style: An autobiography essay’s choice of tone and style depends on its purpose and audience. First, consistency is key to adopting a formal, informal, or narrative tone. Also, reflect on the mood you wish to convey and the emotions associated with your experiences. It helps connect with readers and immerse them in your narrative journey.
• Reflective Writing: Integrating personal reflections is at the heart of an autobiography essay. It involves introspection, analysis, and interpretation of life events through analogy , highlighting their significance in shaping one’s identity and worldview. Moreover, reflective writing adds depth and authenticity to your narrative, fostering a deeper understanding of oneself and fostering empathy among readers.

Essentially, an essay is your honest dialogue with the readers. To add more engagement, sometimes, you can use an informal style . This way, you can connect with the readers using a conversational tone and no specific structure ─ only your ideas and reflections.

Autobiography Types

The captivating allure of autobiographical writing lies in its intimate exploration of lived experiences. But within this seemingly singular genre, a vibrant tapestry of distinct “essay types” exists, each offering unique approaches to self-narration and ways to start an autobiography. Let’s unravel the threads of these captivating forms:

Traditional Autobiography

This type of personal autobiography tells us the story from birth to the present, typically chronologically. It delves into various facets of the author’s life, including childhood, family, education, career, relationships, and significant life events. Additionally, its breadth offers a panoramic view of the author’s journey, providing readers with a thorough understanding of their life story.

More focused than a traditional autobiography of yourself, a memoir centers around a specific theme, period, or aspect of the author’s life. It emphasizes personal reflections, emotions, and insights over a strict chronological recounting of events. By honing in on particular experiences, memoirs offer deeper insights into the author’s psyche and the lessons learned from pivotal moments.

Intellectual Autobiography

This genre focuses on the evolution of the author’s thoughts, beliefs, and intellectual pursuits. It explores how various experiences, books, and interactions have shaped the author’s worldview and philosophy. Thus, academic philosophers or thinkers often penned intellectual autobiographies, offering readers a profound journey through the author’s intellectual growth.

Spiritual Autobiography

This genre may involve experiences of conversion, enlightenment, or a deepening of faith. While common in religious contexts, spiritual autobiographies can also encompass non-religious spiritual experiences, providing readers with insights into the author’s quest for meaning and transcendence. Don’t forget about the topic sentence as well.

Confessional Autobiography

This genre focuses on confessing and reflecting upon personal mistakes, struggles, or failures. Accordingly, it often adopts a tone of redemption or lessons learned. Besides, confessional autobiographies can be cathartic for the author and inspirational for readers navigating challenges. Thus, if you want to motivate readers to overcome some difficulties, you can write an autobiography about yourself and offer readers glimpses into the author’s vulnerabilities and triumphs.

Therapeutic Autobiography

Therapeutic autobiographies involve writing about traumatic or significant life events to process and understand them better. While not always intended for publication, these narratives serve as a means of personal growth and healing, empowering authors to reclaim their narratives, find solace in storytelling, and hook a reader.

Fictionalized Autobiography

This genre draws inspiration from the author’s life but incorporates fictional elements, altered events, or imagined characters. Indeed, fictionalized autobiographies offer creative freedom and allow authors to explore themes that might be difficult to address directly, providing a captivating blend of truth and imagination.

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Composing an Autobiography About Myself Essay Outline

Crafting an essay structure provides a roadmap for students to a comprehensive autobiographical essay outline. Moreover, it helps organize thoughts and ensures a cohesive narrative flow.

What Structuring Approach to Choose?

Choosing the right essay outline approach while writing an autobiography about yourself is crucial. While chronological order is straightforward, other methods like thematic or narrative structures offer unique perspectives and deeper insights into your life story.

Thematic Order

Writing an autobiography around central themes or subjects rather than time is the simplest way to create an autobiography essay. For example, if you’ve had a life-long passion for music, you could structure your story around music’s role at different stages of your life. Consequently, this approach allows you to delve deeply into how specific themes have influenced your development and worldview. If you need some help with the beginning, find hook examples .

Reverse Chronological Order

If you want to make your essay more engaging, you can use this method. Accordingly, write an autobiography starting from the present and working backward. It can be intriguing as it starts with who you are now and gradually reveals how you got there. For instance, you could begin with your current career achievements and then trace back to your education and early influences. Thus, this method can create suspense and a sense of discovery for the reader.

Flashback or Non-Linear Narrative

This method will help you to create a nonstandard essay. For example, when you write an autobiography essay, begin with a significant event and then use flashbacks to provide context and background. It can create a dramatic effect and draw readers in by immediately immersing them in a pivotal moment. After the initial event, you can jump around in time to slowly unravel the story and its implications.

Circular Narrative

Another way to make an engaging essay is by using a circular narrative approach when you plan your essay . For example, students who start and end with the same scene or theme create a circular journey. Thus, this technique can emphasize personal growth or resolving crucial life challenges. For instance, you might start with a scene of you running in a marathon, then recount how you became a runner, and conclude with the same marathon scene, now imbued with deeper meaning. Besides, you can find more autobiography examples for students on the Internet.

Epistolary Format

You may think that this method is only suitable for fiction books. However, it works just as well with autobiographical student essays. For this purpose, try to write your life story through letters, diary entries, or emails. It can provide a personal and intimate feel, and the chronological order can be varied to convey your story best. If you need help, you can always order essay online .

How to Structure an Autobiography Essay?

When you Google: “ autobiography of myself as a student, ” you can find the answer varies depending on the individual’s experiences and storytelling style. However, the following autobiography format is commonly used among students.

The “autobiography about yourself” format is simple and similar to any other type of essay. There are no strict limitations or requirements, but certain considerations should be considered.

Each body paragraph should focus on one event or story, maintaining a clear and well-structured path through the paper. Moreover, providing details and writing with clarity is essential, as readers need background information, context, and character relationships to engage fully.

Although not strictly chronological, the essay should have a logical structure, allowing retrospections and flashbacks to flow smoothly. Transitioning between paragraphs should be seamless to maintain coherence and clarity.

Introduction:

Crafting an engaging introduction sets the tone for the essay and presents the thesis, or central theme. Accordingly, it should capture the reader’s attention and provide a glimpse into the unfolding story. Thus, start an autobiography essay with interesting facts about yourself.

Body Paragraphs:

Structuring body paragraphs involves developing the narrative, providing vivid details, and ensuring coherence. For this purpose, each paragraph should contribute to the overarching story while focusing on the chosen themes or events.

Transitions:

If you use transitions between different stages or events in the story when writing an autobiographical essay, the essay becomes flow and coherent. Likewise, transition words and phrases help guide readers through the narrative, ensuring a seamless reading experience.

Autobiography conclusion:

To end an autobiography, you must summarize the main autobiography ideas presented in the essay and may offer insights or reflections on the author’s experiences. It should be concise and impactful, leaving a lasting impression on the reader.

While these components are typical of autobiographical writing, the order and emphasis may vary depending on the author’s preferences and storytelling approach. Ultimately, the goal is to create a cohesive autobiography narrative that engages readers and offers insight into the author’s life journey.

After writing, you need to revise and polish the essay . Also, don’t forget about punctuation rules .

How to Title an Autobiography Essay?

In autobiography writing, there are no rules for beginning at a certain point; some students prefer to write the title first, and others leave the tasks to the end. How to begin an autobiographical essay depends on the writer, but one of the most important things, regardless of its order, is a good title.

The key points to consider when titling an autobiography are:

• Keeping the title short and precise.
• Make it as engaging as possible.
• Don’t include every keyword you chose in this part.

Some good title examples are:

• The Moment That Changed It All.
• My First Day at the Office Taught Me 4 Things.
• Surviving College.

Tips on Writing Autobiographical Essay

Crafting a compelling autobiographical essay requires careful consideration and skillful storytelling. Here are some tips to help you navigate the process and create a captivating narrative that resonates with readers.

Identifying Key Life Events

Identify key events or periods that have shaped who you are today. These could be moments of triumph, struggle, growth, or transformation. For this purpose, choose events that are significant to your personal development and contribute to the overarching narrative of your story.

Theme and Narrative Arc

Find a central theme or narrative arc that ties your story together. It could be a journey of self-discovery, resilience in the face of adversity, or pursuing a lifelong passion. Thus, a clear theme will help guide your storytelling and give your essay depth and coherence.

Balancing Facts and Reflections

Strike a balance between storytelling and personal reflections. While providing factual details and descriptions is important, remember to infuse your narrative with insights and reflections that add depth and meaning to your experiences. As a rule, you should use storytelling techniques such as vivid imagery, sensory details, and emotional resonance to bring your story to life.

Enhancing Your Essay with Dialogues

Consider incorporating dialogues into your narrative to add authenticity and depth. No doubt, dialogues can bring characters to life, provide insight into relationships, and create moments of tension or intimacy. Use dialogues sparingly and strategically to enhance the overall impact of your essay.

Connecting to the Reader

Make your story relatable and engaging by connecting with the reader personally. For instance, share universal truths, emotions, and experiences that resonate with a broader audience. Plus, use descriptive language, vivid anecdotes, and heartfelt reflections to draw readers into your world and make them feel invested in your journey.

Honesty and Vulnerability

Be honest and vulnerable in your narrative, openly sharing your triumphs and struggles. Accordingly, you can embrace vulnerability as a strength, not a weakness, and show humility in recounting your experiences. Besides, authenticity fosters empathy and connection with readers, making your story more impactful and memorable.

Examples of Autobiography

Reading other autobiographies can provide valuable insights into various narrative techniques, styles, and content choices. By exploring how different authors have structured their life stories, you can gain inspiration for your autobiography. For instance, “The Diary of a Young Girl” by Anne Frank offers a poignant perspective through diary entries, while “Long Walk to Freedom” by Nelson Mandela provides a comprehensive look at political struggle and personal growth.

Other notable examples of autobiographies:

• “Dreams from My Father” by Barack Obama: A memoir by the former U.S. President exploring his early years, his journey of racial identity, and his start in politics.
• “A Moveable Feast” by Ernest Hemingway: Hemingway’s memoir of his years as a young writer in Paris in the 1920s, filled with insights into his creative process and portraits of other famous contemporaries.
• “Educated” by Tara Westover: A recent memoir that has gained significant attention, it tells the story of Westover’s upbringing in a strict and abusive household in rural Idaho, her self-education, and her eventual escape to study at Cambridge and Harvard.
• “Angela’s Ashes” by Frank McCourt: A Pulitzer Prize-winning memoir detailing McCourt’s impoverished childhood in Ireland and his family’s struggles with poverty and alcoholism.

Bottom Line

When you write an autobiography about yourself, you must reflect on the key takeaways. Thus, embracing authenticity, selecting significant life events, and weaving them into a cohesive narrative is paramount. Your story becomes compelling and relatable by finding a central theme or narrative arc, balancing facts with reflections, and connecting with readers personally. Additionally, honesty and vulnerability are your allies in engaging readers and leaving a lasting impact. Therefore, conclude an autobiography with these insights and embark on your journey of self-discovery through storytelling, knowing that your autobiographical essays for college can inspire and resonate with others. Feel free to use a professional essay service if you need some help with the essay.

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How to Write an Autobiographical Essay

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An autobiographical essay is just an essay about something you experienced. Even so, writing an autobiographical essay can be challenging. You might write an autobiographical essay for a class, an application, or just for your own personal enjoyment. Whatever your reason, there are some key concepts and strategies that you will want to keep in mind as you write. Keep reading to learn more about how to write an autobiographical essay.

Planning Your Essay

• an accomplishment like winning an award, getting a job, or graduating from high school
• a trial like a difficult class, an injury, or losing a loved one
• a meaningful experience like discovering a hobby, meeting your best friend, going away to camp, or learning something about yourself
• Make sure that you are comfortable sharing your story. Don’t write about anything too hard or heartbreaking if you are not emotionally ready to handle it.

• If you are writing an autobiographical essay for an application, make sure that you read the instructions well. If the application includes a prompt or question that you need to answer, make sure that the story you intend to tell will respond to this prompt or question.
• If you are writing an autobiographical essay for a class, make sure that you read the assignment guidelines well. Make sure that the story you intend to tell will work for this assignment. Ask your instructor if you have any questions about the assignment.

• If you are writing your essay as part of an application, consider what your readers will be most interested in hearing about.
• If you are writing your essay for a class assignment, consider what your instructor will expect you to include in your essay.

• Try listing. List the ideas that you have for your autobiography and then look over the list you have made and group similar ideas together. Expand those lists by adding more ideas or by using another prewriting activity. [5] X Research source
• Try freewriting. Write nonstop for about 10 minutes. Write whatever comes to mind and don’t edit yourself. Review what you have written. Highlight or underline the most useful information for your autobiography. Repeat the freewriting exercise using the passages you underlined as a starting point. You can repeat this exercise many times to continue to refine and develop your ideas. [6] X Research source
• Try clustering. Write a brief explanation of the subject of your autobiography on the center of a piece of paper and circle it. Then draw three or more lines extending from the circle. Write a corresponding idea at the end of each of these lines. Continue developing your cluster until you have explored as many connections as you can. [7] X Research source
• Try questioning. On a piece of paper, write out “Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?” Space the questions about two or three lines apart on the paper so that you can write your answers on these lines. Respond to each question in as much detail as you can. [8] X Research source

• It may be helpful to decide where to start from and where to finish, and then work on filling in the middle.

Drafting Your Essay

• Do not use the second person perspective (“you”) or switch back and forth between “I” and “you.” Use the first person perspective (“I”) throughout your entire essay.

• Jump right in. One way to begin a story is to immediately begin describing something that happened, even if it happened in the middle of your story. You might start with something like, “There I was, standing in front of the entire 10th grade reading a story I had written.” [11] X Research source
• You can start writing your draft in any order that you like, but then remember to organize the completed story in the proper order.

• Say something tantalizing to your reader. For example, you might start with something like, "I never expected to be as happy as I was on that day." Or, "Many things have happened to me in my life, but this was the worst.” Just make sure that the opening fits with your topic.
• Avoid beginnings that are too general or broad. Never open with, “Since the dawn of time…” This type of opening does not help your reader understand what your story is about. "Too general" openings are boring as well. [13] X Research source
• Avoid opening with a quote, unless it is meaningful to you and crucial to your story. If you want to include a meaningful quote in your autobiographical essay, it should have something to do with your story. You should talk about what it means to you when you provide it.

• You might say something like, “Under these circumstances, I began the most challenging year of my life.” Or, “Before this happened, I had no idea that I could do something so huge.” Choose a transition that fits your introduction and that will connect with the ideas in your next paragraph.

• Talk about why this story is significant to you and what you learned from it. [16] X Research source
• Refer to the beginning of your story in the end by mentioning a situation or person that was central to your introduction. [17] X Research source
• Tell your readers about something that came out of this experience that you were not expecting. [18] X Research source

Enhancing Your Essay

• Instead of saying that your teacher wore a blue dress, say that it was aqua blue with white lace trim on the sleeves.
• Instead of saying you felt nervous, describe your trembling hands, the knot in your stomach, and the weak feeling in your knees.
• Instead of saying that you spoke to your teacher about something important, put the conversation that you had with your teacher into dialogue.

• Use chronological organization if you want to start at the beginning and describe your story in the order that it happened.
• Use starting in the middle organization if you want to put your readers into the midst of your story and then go back to the beginning.
• Use starting at the end organization if you want to tell your readers how your story ended up and then explain how you got to that point.

• Don’t be afraid to show your sense of humor, as long as you don’t think it will disrupt the tone of your essay. In other words, if you are telling a sad story, using sarcasm or making a joke about something serious might not be appropriate.

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• Be concise. When writing a story about your life, it’s best to keep it simple and be straightforward. Avoid padding out your autobiographical essay with unnecessary information. Just include the most important details and describe those details well. Thanks Helpful 6 Not Helpful 0
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To write an autobiographical essay, choose a story from your own life that you're excited to share. Consider who your audience is when selecting a story and go with something that will appeal to them. Next, create an outline for your essay to help you organize all of your thoughts. When you're ready to get started, kick off your essay with an engaging sentence, then jump right into the action to hook your readers. Remember to write in first person and include vivid details to bring your story to life. Let your unique personality shine through! To learn how to enhance your essay by including dialogue, keep reading the article! Did this summary help you? Yes No

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Writing Your PA School Personal Statement with Impact [Including a PA Personal Statement Example]

There are approximately 300 accredited PA (physician assistant) schools in the United States. In the most recent application cycle, these schools received more than 27,000 applications. The matriculation rate for PA schools hovers near 30%, which is lower than the approximate 40% matriculation rate for medical schools. Is becoming a PA a competitive process? Yes! Is it impossible? No!

For you to stand out in this crowded applicant pool, your  personal statement for your PA application  has got to shine from the first sentence to the last. It needs to tell a compelling story that focuses on your sustained interest in the field, while at the same time building a case for your qualifications. It should not rehash your CV, be loaded with clichés, or focus solely on a story that portrays you as a victim.   

The character limit for the CASPA (Centralized Application Service for Physician Assistants) personal statement is 5,000 – which includes spaces ! Some people at first believe the limit is 5,000  words  and end up having to severely cut back their overwritten drafts. Don’t let this happen to you! 

The following successful essay responds to the question, “Why PA?” After reading this essay, you’ll understand why the candidate was accepted into a PA program.  The individual has given permission for their essay to be shared publicly. All personal identifiers and details have been removed to protect their privacy.

PA School Personal Statement Example

I was nine years old and in the middle of Mrs. Russell’s third grade class when my stomach began to itch uncontrollably. I remember thinking to myself, “Did I get bitten by a bug?” Completely distracted by the incessant itching, I asked Mrs. Russell if I could go to the nurse’s office. When the nurse lifted my shirt, I saw the biggest “bug bites” I had ever seen covering the majority of my stomach. She quickly called my mom, who took me to several different doctors as the “bug bites” continued to spread all over my body. None of the doctors could figure out what was wrong with me until I saw a Dermatology PA. He immediately diagnosed me with a delayed allergic reaction. He gave me a medication that almost immediately made the hives disappear. I no longer struggled to open my eyes! It was like magic! To this day, I still have no idea what caused that allergic reaction, but I am grateful for this experience, because it introduced me to a PA who continued to touch my life and cultivate my interest in medicine and healthcare.

Year after year, my love of learning continued to flourish. I began taking gifted classes in math and science in the fifth grade and continued to take honors and advanced placement classes when I reached high school. In addition to my studies, I also began to play volleyball and softball. Through these sports, I learned the skills that a textbook could not teach me, such as accountability, integrity,  teamwork , and leadership. Through my academic achievements, active participation in numerous school clubs, and leadership role as the captain of my volleyball team, my high school nominated me to participate in a National Youth Leadership Forum in the summer of ——. I attended lectures by a PA, a nurse, a chiropractor, a veterinarian, and several physician specialists. In addition to the lectures and countless group activities, I visited several medical facilities. In one of the labs, I saw a table displaying human organs infected with different diseases and cancers. To my surprise, I was eager to touch them and learn why the people they once belonged to could not have been saved. From that experience on, I became determined to pursue medicine.

My  interest in the PA profession  quickly became a driving force in my life after my mom was diagnosed with Stage IV Melanoma in February —— and quickly passed away in October of that year. I was devastated upon hearing her diagnosis. How could this happen when she went to the Dermatologist every three to six months? The same Dermatology PA who had healed me with his “magic pills” spent a significant amount of time with my mom after her diagnosis. He met with her and my dad following a long day of seeing patients, to determine if he had missed something in her regular exams. He also made himself available to my entire family and recommended specialists and experimental treatments. He explained everything we did not understand along the way. It is because of the compassion, sincerity, and care he provided to my mom and my family during this difficult time that I became certain I wanted to pursue my love of medicine as a PA.

Throughout my undergraduate career, as well as the time since I graduated, I have continued to explore the medical field to learn as much as I can about becoming a PA. Through countless hours of  shadowing and volunteering  as a medical assistant at —— Dermatology, I have learned how crucial teamwork, effective communication, detailed note-taking, and compassion are for effective patient care. There have been numerous instances where doing a simple and nearly painless biopsy could have turned into a serious and most certainly uncomfortable medical situation. By taking thorough patient histories, accurately noting any allergies, and verbally communicating these notes to the practitioner, I have been able to ensure that patients receive the best care possible while averting any avoidable crises.

Every challenge and opportunity that I have encountered since I was the itchy little girl sitting in Mrs. Russell’s class has brought me to this decision. My mom’s passing has only made me more passionate about this profession and has given me a new appreciation for life that I hope to share with my patients and community. With my love of learning and helping others, as well as the skill set I will gain from a PA program, I am certain that I will have the tools needed to become a valued member of a larger care team. I am eager to see how these opportunities will positively impact not only my life, but also the lives of others.

What makes this PA personal statement outstanding?

This essay shows that the writer invested the question “Why PA?” with a great deal of thought. It is exceptional for the following reasons:

1. The writer specifically explains “why PA” from the first paragraph to the last.

She writes with honesty and skill, directly responding to the essay prompt. Each paragraph illustrates an additional reason that becoming a PA is the only profession for her. She builds her case by discussing her academic achievements (advanced placement and honors classes in math and science), shadowing and volunteering as a medical assistant, and learning to appreciate the essential “soft skills” of compassion, sincerity, and care in a PA, which convinces the reader that she is grateful for, dedicated to, and thirsts for knowledge in the field of medicine. For these reasons, the candidate was  invited to interview  and received an acceptance.

2. The writer demonstrates a longitudinal pattern of behavior and involvement that supports her educational goal.

In my experience,  past behavior predicts future behavior . This candidate’s pattern of behavior aligns with the work and responsibilities of a PA. With a love of learning and teamwork, as demonstrated by the experiences she chose in the medical arena, the writer proves through her long-term involvement with medicine that she will seamlessly fit into the role of PA. It is clear how much effort she has invested into preparing for this career.

3. An appealing balance of personal motivations and professional goals are represented in the essay.

From her childhood experience of being successfully treated by a PA to appreciating the clinical skill and sensitivity of PAs she encountered over the years, this writer’s motivations are a perfect blend of the personal and the professional. She writes convincingly about why this career path will be so meaningful on multiple levels. By drawing on both her personal contact with the profession and her preparation for it, she convinces readers of the variety and depth of her commitment. Each paragraph builds from personal to professional motivations, culminating in a conclusion where she ties the two threads together.

The profession of PA continues to grow in stature and popularity. When submitting your CASPA, remember you will be evaluated on the competitiveness of your holistic portfolio, with the personal statement being a critical component. Take time to craft your narrative, leave yourself additional time for reviewing and editing your drafts, and ensure that the statement you submit will captivate the admissions committee!

As the former assistant dean of student affairs and career development at the William Beaumont School of Medicine, Dr. Valerie Wherely worked directly with the dean of the School of Medicine, the associate dean of student affairs, the associate dean of clinical curriculum, and the assistant dean of admissions, as well as with Year 4 students on both residency application reviews/critiques and mock interview preparation. Work with Valerie! Schedule a free consultation today!

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How to Write an Autobiography Essay: Guide for College Students

So what is an autobiography essay? It is a paper based on your own personal knowledge that usually dwells upon one episode that had a major influence on one’s personality or worldview. It might be a part of a usual assignment or a necessary part of a college application. In any case, it is something you are sharing to present some personal qualities or make an interesting outcome. It might seem very simple to write about yourself at first glance, however, it takes a lot of skill and planning to select the subject and display it in the best possible way. Some people find writing an autobiography essay even more complicated than any other paper as there is a lot of freedom regarding the subject and there are always worries about not being too self-involved. This article on how to write an autobiography essay will help you complete a flawless and powerful paper.

Autobiography Essay Format

Considering planning a paper, an outline is one of the fundamental parts. You need to have a draft plan for the work’s structure. Not only does it provide a coherent order to your reflections, but it also makes a paper more readable and easy to follow. The first thing to do before starting on your own paper is to find inspiration. You can ask for some illustrations from your professor, or look for them online – there are many good presentations on the internet. An autobiography essay is not a story of one’s life; it usually concerns one event or experience that is worth sharing. An event that had an influence on the person who lived it through, and can provide a meaningful message to the reader.

How Do You Structure an Autobiography?

Generally, an autobiography essay outline follows the common framework of any essay, meaning a five-paragraph paper. It shouldn’t be very long; however, you may change the standard outline according to your needs. It might be closer to a narrative paper, but remember to use the first-person narration, as it is not fiction. It is not a short story, it is a personal essay.

When planning an outline consider the story and how it can be presented, how many paragraphs do you need and what are the demands to an assignment. It might be a good point to include a plot twist. However, you can never go wrong with a well-proven traditional structure.

How to Title an Autobiography Essay?

There is no right or wrong time for choosing the title for life story. Some start with it, others do it in the end, it is totally up to you. A title can be creative if you want but it should be appealing, intriguing and deal with the main point of your paper.

The tips on how to write a title vary, but the main aspects are:

• It shouldn’t be very long;
• Do not try to include all the key points in a title;
• You may use puns for a comedy effect if it is appropriate;
• Make it engaging for a reader.

You can look through creative titles about yourself online and use them as a basis for your thought process. However, do not use someone’s idea as your own as it won’t represent your writing.

Here are some autobiography titles ideas that might inspire you:

• Driving Exam that Almost Drove me Crazy;
• Living Through a Happy Accident;
• What My First Job Taught Me;
• The Day that Changed it All;
• Surviving High-School Graduation.

The choice of a title is completely up to you as long as it is made in accordance with the assignment’s requirements.

How to Start an Autobiography Essay?

Before you start writing, brainstorm and choose an incident you want to depict. It must be relevant and have something to tell the reader. Create an outline and follow a coherent way to describe it. The first sentence of an autobiography paper must be attention-grabbing and interesting. You might as well start right with the story instead of putting a long autobiography introduction. Underline the main idea of your writing and what is going to be disclosed.

There are several good ways to start an autobiography, such as to start in the middle of a setting, “Here I was standing in front of the whole group with my presentation.” Another way is to add a little bit of suspense, like “I never knew that such a simple thing as going to a vet with my dog can change my whole perspective”.

An autobiography essay introduction doesn’t have to be very long. Underline the main point, create a setting or go directly to the events that inspired you. A good idea is to use a non-chronological order in the description of events to make the story more interesting. It is also crucial to have a nice transition to the main part; it can be a sentence like, “I’d never expected that what was coming next would be the most important day of my life.”

How to End an Autobiography Essay?

Autobiography conclusions are as essential as the beginning, as they sum up the story, tie the ends together and make a meaningful impact on the reader. How to end an autobiography in a stylish and exciting way? First of all, conclude what has been stated before and focus on why it is important, what was the influence on your life and what conclusion did you make from this experience. Refer to the significance and make a connection to the beginning. Describe the central person in the story if there had been one. It is also great if you tell what was so unexpected for you and what this event has taught you about yourself or the world around you.

If the story was non-chronological, make sure that by the end of an autobiographical essay it all comes together as one comprehensive piece. Check one more time if it is easy to follow and creates a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.

Extra Tips on How to Write a Good Autobiography Essay

Writing an autobiography essay can be challenging as it deals with the introspective process and makes us learn about ourselves more. It is important not only to follow formatting requirements but also to create a living picture of an event that the reader can re-live. Some students choose to use a fast essay writing service to help them with this assignment and it is only understandable.

Here are some more tips for writing an excellent autobiography narrative essay:

• Select an event you are excited to tell about, it will make it more engaging and easy to write;
• Think about the audience of your paper, who will read it and what they might be interested in;
• Use a first-person narration to underline your perspective;
• Be sincere and be yourself. After all, this is your life you are writing about. Even a negative experience can teach us a lot;
• Understand the purpose of your work – what is the key point you are making? What is the question you are trying to answer?
• When writing an autobiography essay always check the demands of the assignment. An application and a college task have different purposes. Be sure you know all the guidelines;
• Don’t forget to describe the setting and add some vivid details to make the story more interesting and create a picture in the reader’s mind;
• After you are done, take some time to proofread your text. Here are some useful proofreading tips that might help you to check your writing and make sure it is flawless.

Autobiography Essay Example/Autobiography Sample Essay

Here is a short excerpt from an autobiography essay:

“When I was growing up I had never wanted to be a teacher unlike many of my peers. However, one day what promised to be a normal Monday changed my whole perspective. I was in high school at that time, and we went with my mother to visit a college to find out more about the programs I might follow in the future. We were lucky to visit a lecture by a physics professor and I thought it might be boring at first. Little did I know, this lecture was the most important hour in my life.

It was a nice sunny day and the campus looked great, there were lots of students and they all seemed so adult to me. It also was unbelievable that soon I might be one of these intelligent and nice people. We were welcomed and had a great excursion over the campus and the main building and now it was the time to visit a lecture.”

It is an example that shows how to complete an introduction and connect it to the main part. Here are many other autobiography essay examples that you can read and use as an outline for inspiration.

When working on a personal essay it is important to spend a lot of time planning and selecting a subject. Find an event that was significant for you that can present your worldview or unique experience. Create an outline and take enough time to draft ideas and think on how to present a story.

Remember to be frank about what you are writing, do not make fiction as it is inappropriate. Show what you’ve learned and focus on it in the conclusion.

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University of California San Diego (UCSD) Secondary Application – Autobiography Tips & Essay Prompts

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The UC San Diego secondary application is notorious for being tough because it has the notorious autobiography ! Does UC San Diego School of Medicine send a secondary application to all medical school applicants? Unfortunately, no. The UCSD School of Medicine is selective in who it sends a secondary to. So, if you receive a secondary from the UCSD admissions committee, that means they are interested in you! Start on the UCSD secondary sooner rather than later, and do not put this off until the last secondary essay. UCSD typically has a one-month deadline from the date you receive the secondary application. 

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UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2023 – 2024

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• Autobiographical Sketch: This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine, including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS statement will not be acceptable. (6,000 characters max) Please note: If you are applying to the MD/PhD program , please include why you are specifically interested in seeking MD/PhD training at UCSD.
• Academic Medicine (Working as a faculty member at a School of Medicine either as a clinician, a clinician-educator, or a clinician investigator. This could be in any field of medicine)
• Primary Care and/or work in underserved communities (Working as a general internist, a pediatrician, or a family medicine physician and/or spending the majority of your time working in a community currently underserved by the medical profession)
• Public Health, administrative leadership in medicine (Pursuing an MPH and/or working for a public health department or organization; working in health care policy; working as a hospital administrator)
• Specialist in private practice (Working in a private practice or managed care setting as a sub-specialist. Examples include cardiologist, infectious disease specialist, obstetrician, orthopedic surgeon, general surgeon, anesthesiologist, radiologist)
• Other/undecided
• Optional: On your AMCAS Application, you were asked to identify your three “most meaningful” experiences. These activities have been auto-filled in your secondary application. In addition to the information you provided on the AMCAS application, we would like to know if there are any additional activities you would consider among your most meaningful. This may include activities that you’ve already completed but couldn’t include as you were limited to three selections on the AMCAS application, or it may include a new activity that began after your initial AMCAS application was submitted. Use the “Add” button below to enter a new activity. We would also like to know if a letter of recommendation has been submitted on your behalf by somebody you worked with through this experience. If you do not have a letter from this experience, simply type N/A. This information allows Admissions Committee members reviewing your application to more readily match your letters to your experiences and thus facilitates the review of your application. DO NOT LIST ANY ACTIVITY MORE THAN ONCE. (100 character description for each activity you add)
• Optional: Please describe how educational disparity, health disparity and/or marginalization has impacted you and your community? ( 4,800 characters max )

UC San Diego School of Medicine PRIME-HEq Essays

• Please describe your interest in the PRIME-HEq program. Topics to include are longitudinal experiences that you’ve had with underserved communities, including the type of community that you’ve worked with and your level of involvement. Additionally, you should discuss the length of time that you’ve spent working in these communities. ( 4,800 characters max )

UC San Diego School of Medicine Global Health Academic Concentration Essays

• Please describe your interest in Global Health. The term Global Health can have many meanings; for our purposes, we find the definition provided by Koplan et. al. in their 2009 Lancet publication useful: “the area of study, research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide”. In your essay, be sure to describe any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how Global Health issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine. ( 4,800 characters max )
• Please describe your experiences with American Indian and Alaskan Native communities, including the type of community and your level of involvement. Please provide the length of time you spent working in or exposed to these communities. Be sure to detail any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how American Indian and Alaskan Native issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine. Finally, please delineate how completion of the PRIME-TIDE program will help you obtain your medical education goals. ( 4,800 characters max )

UC San Diego School of Medicine PRIME TIDE (Transforming Indigenous Doctor Education)

• Please describe your experiences with American Indian and Alaskan Native communities, including the type of community and your level of involvement. Please provide the length of time you spent working in or exposed to these communities. Be sure to detail any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how American Indian and Alaskan Native issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine. Finally, please delineate how completion of the PRIME-TIDE program will help you obtain your medical education goals. ( 4,800 characters max )

Tips to Answer UCSD Secondary Essays

UCSD Secondaries Pre-Writing Guidance: We would not pre-write your UCSD secondaries because not every applicant receives a UCSD secondary. However, once you receive the UCSD secondary application, time is ticking, as there is usually a 1-month deadline. This is also a hard secondary to stand out so contact us if you have questions or want us to help you edit your UCSD secondary.

  UCSD Secondary Tip #1: Fill your UCSD autobiographical sketch with stories. Choose times in your life that are important to YOU. Writing the UCSD autobiographical sketch is similar to writing a personal statement.

• Read out HIGH-YIELD blog post that we created to help students answer the UCSD autobiography:  How To Write An Autobiography For Medical School

UCSD Secondary Tip #2: Read our blog post on “ How to Get Into UCSD Medical Schoo l” to learn more about UCSD’s curriculum and opportunities. From our experiences, UCSD medical students typically have some commonalities in their backgrounds: 1) Strong research background 2) Strong academics (had high GPAs and/or MCAT scores) 3) Many applicants are from California, but UC San Diego School of Medicine is increasingly recruiting top out-of-state applicants 4) Medical students interested in health disparities, particularly among Mexican immigrant populations (since UCSD is right at the United States-Mexico border!) 5) Medical students with computer science / innovation / artificial intelligence backgrounds 6) Students with ample clinical experiences related to the field of medicine, practice setting, and type of physician they want to be in their future careers.

• Learn more about UCSD Medical School’s curriculum and culture in our researched UCSD Medical School Profile . 

UCSD Secondary Tip #3: Make sure to convey “why medicine” in your UCSD autobiographical sketch. This essay should complement your personal statement – it is OKAY to have similar themes and interests in your AMCAS personal statement and UCSD autobiographical sketch.

UCSD Secondary Tip #4: A strong UCSD autobiographical sketch includes “Why UCSD” at the end. You should be able to tie your experiences together in a cohesive narrative, and then write how UCSD will help you become the physician you want to be by the end of the autobiographical sketch. 

UCSD Secondary Tip #5: For the UCSD secondaries question about your career goals, choose a specialty that relates to your previous extra-curricular activities. For example, if you’ve done a lot of public health or community health, don’t be shy to pick public health. 

UCSD Secondary Tip #6:  We know the autobiography is super long, and the last thing you want to do is write more essays. HOWEVER, if the additional essays pertain to you, you should write them! Many students do live around healthcare disparities and about 50% of the students we’ve coached through our application packages have added 1-2 more most meaningful activities. 

UCSD Secondary Tip #7: As we stressed above, don’t wait last minute to work on the UC San Diego secondary application. We can help you with these tough secondary essays through our secondary essay packages . 

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UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2022 – 2023

• Autobiographical Sketch: This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS primary application statement will not be acceptable.  (6,000 characters max) Please note: If you are applying to the MD/PhD program , please include why you are specifically interested in seeking MD/PhD training at UCSD.
• (If applicable) If you are an out-of-state applicant, please let us know if there are specific reasons for your interest in the UCSD School of Medicine ( 1000 characters )
• Do you consider yourself to be a member of a group that is marginalized  in a way that systemically affects access to quality education or healthcare? (Y/N) if Yes, Please describe how educational disparity, health disparity and/or marginalization has impacted you and your community? (4,800 characters max)

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UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2021 – 2022

• Autobiographical Sketch: This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS primary application personal statement will not be acceptable.  (6,000 characters max) Please note: If you are applying to the MD/PhD program , please include why you are specifically interested in seeking MD/PhD training at UCSD.

UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2020 – 2021

• Autobiographical Sketch : This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine, including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS statement will not be acceptable. (6,000 characters max)
• Experiences: The three experiences you identified as “most meaningful” on your AMCAS Application are listed below. We would also like to know if you have had any NEW experiences that you would consider among your “most meaningful” (i.e. experiences you’ve had in the time between submitting your application to AMCAS and working on the secondary application). Adding new experiences is optional . You can add new activities using the fields below. A corresponding letter of recommendation for the new experience is not required. Please enter “N/A” in the “Author of corresponding letter of recommendation” field if you do not have a letter . If you do not have any new activities to add, you can simply click “Save and Continue” at the bottom of the page and this section of the application will be marked as complete. (100 characters max)

UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2019 – 2020

• Autobiographical Sketch : This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine, including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS statement will not be acceptable.  (6,000 characters max)
• (Optional) Prime-HEq:  Please describe your interest in the PRIME-HEq program. Topics to include are longitudinal experiences that you’ve had with underserved communities, including the type of community that you’ve worked with and your level of involvement. Additionally, you should discuss the length of time that you’ve spent working in these communities. (4,800 characters max)
• (Optional) Global Health Academic Concentration:  Please describe your interest in Global Health. The term Global Health can have many meanings; for our purposes, we find the definition provided by Koplan et. al. in their 2009 Lancet publication useful: “the area of study, research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide”. In your essay, be sure to describe any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how Global Health issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine. (4,800 characters max)
• (Optional) MAS in Clinical Research:  Please describe your interest in the MAS-Clinical Research program. Topics to include are your previous experience with clinical and/or translational research, your role within the research group, and what you envision for a career that includes clinical and/or translational research. A letter of recommendation from the individual supervising your previous experience is helpful but not required. (4,800 characters max)

UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2018 – 2019

• Autobiographical Sketch: This should be a true autobiographical statement. Topics to be included are family, childhood, primary and secondary school years, undergraduate years, and, if applicable, what you’ve done since completing your bachelor’s degree. You should also discuss the motivational factors which led you to a career in medicine including any disadvantages or obstacles which might put your accomplishments into context. A repeat of your AMCAS statement will not be acceptable. Please note: if you are applying to the MD/PhD program, please include why you are specifically interested in seeking MD/PhD training at UCSD.
• (Optional)  Please describe your interest in the PRIME-HEq program. Topics to include are longitudinal experiences that you’ve had with underserved communities, including the type of community that you’ve worked with and your level of involvement. Additionally, you should discuss the length of time that you’ve spent working in these communities.
• (Optional)  Global Health Academic Concentration: Please describe your interest in Global Health. The term Global Health can have many meanings; for our purposes, we find the definition provided by Koplan et. al. in their 2009 Lancet publication useful: “the area of study, research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide”. In your essay, be sure to describe any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how Global Health issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine.
• (Optional)  Please describe your interest in the MAS-Clinical Research program. Topics to include are your previous experience with clinical and/or translational research, your role within the research group, and what you envision for a career that includes clinical and/or translational research. A letter of recommendation from the individual supervising your previous experience is helpful but not required. 

UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2017 – 2018

• (If Applicable)   Please describe your interest in the PRIME-HEq program. Topics to include are longitudinal experiences that you’ve had with underserved communities, including the type of community that you’ve worked with and your level of involvement. Additionally, you should discuss the length of time that you’ve spent working in these communities. (4,800 characters max)
• (If Applicable) Please describe your interest in Global Health. The term Global Health can have many meanings; for our purposes, we find the definition provided by Koplan et. al. in their 2009 Lancet publication useful: “the area of study, research and practice that places a priority on improving health and achieving equity in health for all people worldwide”. In your essay, be sure to describe any personal or professional experiences that have shaped your interests, and how Global Health issues have influenced your decision to pursue a career in medicine. (4,800 characters max)
• (If Applicable)   Please describe your interest in the MAS-Clinical Research program. Topics to include are your previous experience with clinical and/or translational research, your role within the research group, and what you envision for a career that includes clinical and/or translational research. A letter of recommendation from the individual supervising your previous experience is helpful but not required. (4,800 characters max)
• (If Applicable) Have you been convicted of a crime/arrested? If yes , provide details concerning the date and place of arrest, the nature of the offense and the sentence and/or fine imposed. (500 characters max)

UC San Diego Secondary Application Essay Prompts: 2016 – 2017

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